In the prevailing screnario,workforce plays an essential role in our lives.Some people ponder that wealthy nations ought to not employe skilled labour from penurious countries as poor countries need the worker more.I agree with the aforementioned statement.
Firstly, there are a lot of benefits of working in wealthy countries,nowadays a plethoraof youngster are immigrating to abroad wealthy countries because in wealthy countries they get various opportunites which is like an icing on the cake for people.Moreover.wealthy companies provide high wages to skilled labour .As a consequences,i believe that rich countries should not hire workers from poor countries.
To strenghthen my view,if wealthy countries hire poor countries workforce,they would not face any kind of obstruction in life.Furthermore,these countries not only helps to reduce the gap between rich and poor nation but also it aids to abolish unemployment.Additionally,in wealthy nations people earn more money which helps to improve their standard living
Although it is true that some time wealthy countries attract to poor nations labour due to high income.Moreover,they hire poor countries labour staff in less pay .Also,it helps to improve the economy of countries and saves lot of money ,yet i strongly believe that wealthy countries not hire penurious countries labour force
In conclusion,I firmly believe that wealthy countries boon for poor countries.Also people are immigrating for improving their life
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, furthermore, if, moreover, so, then, in conclusion, kind of, it is true
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 13.1623246493 38% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 10.4138276553 38% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 20.0 24.0651302605 83% => OK
Preposition: 29.0 41.998997996 69% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 8.3376753507 36% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1274.0 1615.20841683 79% => OK
No of words: 219.0 315.596192385 69% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.81735159817 5.12529762239 114% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.84690116678 4.20363070211 92% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.88809500813 2.80592935109 139% => OK
Unique words: 124.0 176.041082164 70% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.566210045662 0.561755894193 101% => OK
syllable_count: 369.0 506.74238477 73% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 3.0 16.0721442886 19% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 73.0 20.2975951904 360% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 236.902699201 49.4020404114 480% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 424.666666667 106.682146367 398% => Less chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 73.0 20.7667163134 352% => Less words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 32.6666666667 7.06120827912 463% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 32.0 5.01903807615 638% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 8.67935871743 35% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.414790020892 0.244688304435 170% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.31361312389 0.084324248473 372% => Sentence topic similarity is high.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0467642607887 0.0667982634062 70% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.258280237754 0.151304729494 171% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0745020028248 0.056905535591 131% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 42.5 13.0946893788 325% => Automated_readability_index is high.
flesch_reading_ease: -11.08 50.2224549098 -22% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 15.9 7.44779559118 213% => Smog_index is high.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 32.9 11.3001002004 291% => Flesch kincaid grade is high.
coleman_liau_index: 17.66 12.4159519038 142% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 11.08 8.58950901804 129% => OK
difficult_words: 53.0 78.4519038076 68% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 19.0 9.78957915832 194% => OK
gunning_fog: 31.2 10.1190380762 308% => Gunning_fog is high.
text_standard: 19.0 10.7795591182 176% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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