A rise in the standard of living in country often only seems to benefit cities rather than rural areas What problems might this difference cause How might these problems be reduced

Essay topics:

A rise in the standard of living in country often only seems to benefit cities rather than rural areas.
What problems might this difference cause?
How might these problems be reduced?

Many countries have become more affluent in the past decade or two, although this has disproportionally tended to advantage cities, while leaving country areas deprived. This causes a number of issues, though some solutions might also be suggested.

There a number of difficulties caused by differences in prosperity levels in a country. A rush to urban areas is one of these, exacerbating difficulties in rural areas while putting pressure on cities' infrastructure. Valuable regional industries and agriculture may be left to wither and unemployment in cities may grow, possibly corresponding with greater crime levels. The development of a two-speed economy may also increase feelings of resentment, envy and social division. This is particularly so in the country, where unemployment may additionally lead to depression and substance abuse.

These problems can be mitigated through government-led action. Regional development schemes can encourage businesses to invest in rural areas and improve infrastructure in these places. Education is one particular area where a difference can be made. Mandated minimum wages can also reduce the attractions of high city salaries, since the same basic pay will be available nationwide. Finally, the tourism potential of country areas can be exploited more fully by using suitable publicity campaigns, bringing income to depressed regions.

In conclusion, the unfortunate disparities between rural poverty and metropolitan affluence result in a number of problems. Nevertheless, these can be addressed through a series of measures. Hopefully these can bring about greater equality for people living in different areas of the same country.

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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 4, column 195, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[2]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'cities'' or 'city's'?
Suggestion: cities'; city's
...n rural areas while putting pressure on cities infrastructure. Valuable regional indus...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, finally, if, may, nevertheless, so, while, in conclusion

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 13.0 7.85571142285 165% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 7.30460921844 27% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 8.0 24.0651302605 33% => OK
Preposition: 37.0 41.998997996 88% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 8.3376753507 120% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1442.0 1615.20841683 89% => OK
No of words: 250.0 315.596192385 79% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.768 5.12529762239 113% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.97635364384 4.20363070211 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.24669924693 2.80592935109 116% => OK
Unique words: 159.0 176.041082164 90% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.636 0.561755894193 113% => OK
syllable_count: 466.2 506.74238477 92% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.9 1.60771543086 118% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 20.2975951904 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 32.8326395866 49.4020404114 66% => OK
Chars per sentence: 96.1333333333 106.682146367 90% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.6666666667 20.7667163134 80% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.13333333333 7.06120827912 59% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 8.67935871743 46% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 9.0 3.9879759519 226% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.258406208239 0.244688304435 106% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0822935335241 0.084324248473 98% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0446766873398 0.0667982634062 67% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.146178104244 0.151304729494 97% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.028330612482 0.056905535591 50% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.1 13.0946893788 108% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 29.86 50.2224549098 59% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.1 11.3001002004 116% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 15.89 12.4159519038 128% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.75 8.58950901804 125% => OK
difficult_words: 100.0 78.4519038076 127% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 9.78957915832 107% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.1190380762 83% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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More content wanted.

Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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