The role of prisons should be to punish criminals who have committed serious crimes. Training courses and education offered to prisoners are a waste of taxpayer’s money. To what extent do you agree or disagree?
In a contemporary era, numerous crimes rates has been increased just because of unemployment. many people asserts that prisoners should be punished who have done a plenty of serious crimes and providing a education courses to them like a dump of the money. so this essay is partially agree with this and enunciate regarding this below.
To originate on, why the people attempt to commit the crime ? just because of money which is playing a essential part for every part of individual life. Predominately, many people tend to do crimes a lot. even some criminals are much cruel even they can kill their own family just go have their property.
having this sort of thinking, people should be hanged. For example there was a news came in newspaper where it was mention about that one women had killed her husband just to snatch the property.
To the contrary part, if we provide a some crumb of education courses may there would be a probability of prediction crime. where every individual could have sense of humour against committing the crimes. education make the people proficient to earn the money. For instance, there was a student from university of kurushetr, who had done his diploma in electrical engineer. After completion of his study. he had tried in many discipline company but eventually he not got a job anywhere. so he decided to start his own business of electronic shop and one day he got success. As he was became skillful with quality of study but never tend to commit the crime.
In conclusion, it is evident nowadays people are committing a crimes just for a money or property. but if we provide them right education may be there would be a chance to overcome the crime.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, if, may, regarding, so, even so, for example, for instance, in conclusion, sort of
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 13.1623246493 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 24.0 24.0651302605 100% => OK
Preposition: 38.0 41.998997996 90% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.3376753507 108% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1402.0 1615.20841683 87% => OK
No of words: 294.0 315.596192385 93% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.76870748299 5.12529762239 93% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.14082457966 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.63975310712 2.80592935109 94% => OK
Unique words: 164.0 176.041082164 93% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.557823129252 0.561755894193 99% => OK
syllable_count: 460.8 506.74238477 91% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 19.0 16.0721442886 118% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 20.2975951904 74% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 30.9457572083 49.4020404114 63% => OK
Chars per sentence: 73.7894736842 106.682146367 69% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.4736842105 20.7667163134 75% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.57894736842 7.06120827912 65% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 19.0 5.01903807615 379% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 8.0 3.9879759519 201% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 3.4128256513 176% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.18622177346 0.244688304435 76% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.056422615157 0.084324248473 67% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0696568638921 0.0667982634062 104% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.10529683003 0.151304729494 70% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0506931155646 0.056905535591 89% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.8 13.0946893788 67% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 56.25 50.2224549098 112% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 11.3001002004 81% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.09 12.4159519038 81% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.71 8.58950901804 90% => OK
difficult_words: 62.0 78.4519038076 79% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 9.78957915832 72% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 10.1190380762 79% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.7795591182 74% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.