The role of prisons should be to punish criminals who have committed serious crimes. Training courses and education offered to prisoners are a waste of taxpayer’s money. To what extent do you agree or disagree?
In a contemporary era, many crimes rates has been increased just to rob the finance. many people asserts that prisoners should be punished who have done a plenty of serious crimes and providing a education courses to them like a dump of the taxpayer's money. So this essay is intensively agree with this and enunciate about this below.
To originate on, people attempt the crimes just to archive the finance and many people got same goal of crimes. even people who tend to sell the girls to those merchants who want to take advantage of them. For insight, once a time there was news came in newspaper where it was mention about that one women had killed her husband just to snatch the property.
Furthermore, if we give them a some education according to their interest that would be devastating for people. Consequently, that will alarm a more rates of crimes such as, robbing a money from digital world many criminal would become black hat hackers and they tend to target a many bank accounts. Also they child make a some sort of bug or trojan which could make our system out of order. where they could chance to transfer the money from their bank accounts.so this is hence proved money is totally waste on them to providing a desirable education to episodes
In conclusion, this is clear providing a some proper education would decrease the crime level but we cannot judge a people what type of think they have. we cannot rely on the them, anyhow they can indulge themselves into any criminal activity to get the money. even use of cyber hacking they can hack many atm accounts with some programming language if we offer them some sort of education.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, consequently, furthermore, hence, if, so, in conclusion, sort of, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 13.1623246493 68% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 7.85571142285 140% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 10.4138276553 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 10.0 7.30460921844 137% => OK
Pronoun: 32.0 24.0651302605 133% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 39.0 41.998997996 93% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1371.0 1615.20841683 85% => OK
No of words: 292.0 315.596192385 93% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.69520547945 5.12529762239 92% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.13376432452 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.40907801398 2.80592935109 86% => OK
Unique words: 173.0 176.041082164 98% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.592465753425 0.561755894193 105% => OK
syllable_count: 441.9 506.74238477 87% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 24.0 20.2975951904 118% => OK
Sentence length SD: 66.6134683579 49.4020404114 135% => OK
Chars per sentence: 114.25 106.682146367 107% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.3333333333 20.7667163134 117% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.0 7.06120827912 99% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 13.0 5.01903807615 259% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 2.0 8.67935871743 23% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 3.9879759519 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.164556500814 0.244688304435 67% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0586040657314 0.084324248473 69% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0881344335813 0.0667982634062 132% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0999577012572 0.151304729494 66% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0673012278321 0.056905535591 118% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.9 13.0946893788 99% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 55.58 50.2224549098 111% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 11.3001002004 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.28 12.4159519038 83% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.18 8.58950901804 95% => OK
difficult_words: 62.0 78.4519038076 79% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.1190380762 115% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.