Many people believe that women make better parents than men and that is why they have the greater role in raising children in most societies. Others claim that men are just as good as women at parenting
Caring a child requires a greatest responsibility in upbringing and it is both job of parents but according to people some trends have changed which make the topic to assert that women are only one who can do better bring up the child than mens while other claims that mens are as equally as women to fulfill the duty of caring the child.
To begin with, ever since a child is born that a time mother is ready to take a responsibilities even in minor detail which could be clear from one example, Changing the diapers, brushing the teeth, sending him to school etc which every thing is cover up by one mother.even in preparing a lunch box for his child and men responsibility to drop him or her to school in exact time.so these responsibilities are accomplished by both people in raising the child and day by day these duties will increase in upbringing the child.it is usually seen in some parents who got hectic schedule which put less supervisory to their child will lead them to such deviated path.
furthermore, most of the women and mens are doing professional jobs where the responsibilities are further divided equally to take care the child even in preparing the food for child and drop at school.It is true children are more attracted to mothers than father because she is only one who give a birth to child.but in some cases some child lost their mothers in very early age for instance, a survey was conducted by census 2001 where opponents of the census very hardly come to know some children were living with their fathers because some children lost their mother when they born and so mens had taken a responsiblity to look after their children.personally speaking, mens are not less than any women
In conclusion, mens are also capable to take liability of their children in case if their mother is no more because of any illness and I have seen many father who are able to do the same duty as women do for their child.
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- The diagrams below show UK students' responses to the question of to what extent would they describe themselves as financially organised.Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant. 56
- The diagrams below show UK students' responses to the question of to what extent would they describe themselves as financially organised. 56
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 25, Rule ID: THE_SUPERLATIVE[1]
Message: Use 'the' with the superlative.
Suggestion: the
Caring a child requires a greatest responsibility in upbringing a...
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Line 1, column 282, Rule ID: EQUALLY_AS[1]
Message: Don't say 'equally as'. You can use either 'equally' or 'as' on its own. When comparing two nouns, use 'just as'.
Suggestion: equally; as; just as
...ens while other claims that mens are as equally as women to fulfill the duty of caring the...
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Line 3, column 79, Rule ID: A_PLURAL[1]
Message: Don't use indefinite articles with plural words. Did you mean 'a responsibility' or simply 'responsibilities'?
Suggestion: a responsibility; responsibilities
...orn that a time mother is ready to take a responsibilities even in minor detail which could be cle...
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Line 5, column 96, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: So
...er are father are working professionals.So it will be judgemental to say that only...
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Line 5, column 500, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[1]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: However,
... but they have hard time expressing it. However they try to protect their children sile...
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Line 7, column 1, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Furthermore
...their child best in every situation. furthermore, most of the women and mens are doing p...
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Line 7, column 203, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: It
...g the food for child and drop at school.It is true children are more attracted to ...
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Line 7, column 708, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...eaking, mens are not less than any women In conclusion, mens are also capable to ...
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Line 9, column 148, Rule ID: MANY_NN[1]
Message: Possible agreement error. The noun father seems to be countable; consider using: 'many fathers'.
Suggestion: many fathers
... because of any illness and I have seen many father who are able to do the same duty as wom...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, furthermore, however, if, look, moreover, so, while, for instance, in conclusion, in some cases, it is true, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 29.0 13.1623246493 220% => Less to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 16.0 10.4138276553 154% => OK
Relative clauses : 17.0 7.30460921844 233% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 36.0 24.0651302605 150% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 58.0 41.998997996 138% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 8.3376753507 36% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2110.0 1615.20841683 131% => OK
No of words: 459.0 315.596192385 145% => Less content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.59694989107 5.12529762239 90% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.62863751936 4.20363070211 110% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.63501658462 2.80592935109 94% => OK
Unique words: 212.0 176.041082164 120% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.461873638344 0.561755894193 82% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 667.8 506.74238477 132% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 8.0 16.0721442886 50% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 57.0 20.2975951904 281% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 298.200828931 49.4020404114 604% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 263.75 106.682146367 247% => Less chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 57.375 20.7667163134 276% => Less words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 16.625 7.06120827912 235% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 9.0 5.01903807615 179% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.212745323414 0.244688304435 87% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0989433898097 0.084324248473 117% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0773733810079 0.0667982634062 116% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.144543577267 0.151304729494 96% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0714403435266 0.056905535591 126% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 28.9 13.0946893788 221% => Automated_readability_index is high.
flesch_reading_ease: 22.08 50.2224549098 44% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 24.3 11.3001002004 215% => Flesch kincaid grade is high.
coleman_liau_index: 10.29 12.4159519038 83% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.91 8.58950901804 104% => OK
difficult_words: 71.0 78.4519038076 91% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 26.5 9.78957915832 271% => Linsear_write_formula is high.
gunning_fog: 24.8 10.1190380762 245% => Gunning_fog is high.
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.