Many people believe that women make better parents than men and that is why they have the greater role in raising children in most societies. Others claim that men are just as good as women at parenting.
Write an essay expressing your point of view.
The topic of whether women or men play a major role in raising the children always is a huge debate among public. Obviously, children should be raised with great moral standards at home so they may grow up as good citizens in the future. From this aspect, I believe both of the parents share equal credit in raising kids. And this essay will discuss this.
On the one hand, women are often be seem as great care takers and also the important role for cultivate child’s moral. Children spend major time with their moms, therefore women have more chance to teach kids on how to be a better person in the society. Also, lots of women have more experience in cooking nutritious foods for children which helps them stay healthy. Generally, women teach children how to take care of others, because they can learn it when their mother take good care of them. And then children may grow up with a great sense of responsibility in the future.
On the other hand, most children take father as their ideal person and want to a people like him in the future. Mostly, men always struggle so much in order to earn money for family. This can teach kids the difficulty of living in society, which push them to study better in aim of helping the family financially in future. Also, fathers are often more serious toward kids, and this can help the child become cautious and modest.
In conclusion, both men and women share important place in educating children from different aspect. And the absence of either side is harmful toward children.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 9, column 314, Rule ID: IN_PAST[1]
Message: Did you mean: 'in the future'?
Suggestion: in the future
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, if, may, so, then, therefore, in conclusion, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 13.1623246493 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 7.30460921844 41% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 16.0 24.0651302605 66% => OK
Preposition: 43.0 41.998997996 102% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 8.3376753507 24% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1275.0 1615.20841683 79% => OK
No of words: 271.0 315.596192385 86% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.70479704797 5.12529762239 92% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.05734859645 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.26195951169 2.80592935109 81% => OK
Unique words: 151.0 176.041082164 86% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.557195571956 0.561755894193 99% => OK
syllable_count: 390.6 506.74238477 77% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.60771543086 87% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 4.0 0.809619238477 494% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 29.2047180359 49.4020404114 59% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 85.0 106.682146367 80% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.0666666667 20.7667163134 87% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.53333333333 7.06120827912 64% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 8.67935871743 138% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.231542076816 0.244688304435 95% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0757182934735 0.084324248473 90% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0476560883701 0.0667982634062 71% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.141709198373 0.151304729494 94% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0471369637581 0.056905535591 83% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.7 13.0946893788 74% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 70.13 50.2224549098 140% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.9 11.3001002004 70% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.68 12.4159519038 78% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.33 8.58950901804 85% => OK
difficult_words: 48.0 78.4519038076 61% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 9.78957915832 77% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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