Many people believe that women make better parents than men and that is why they have the greater role in raising children in most societies. Others claim that men are just as good as women at parenting.
I strongly believe that parental responsibilities and roles are very important for the parents to make their children prepare for the future. They both have different responsibilities but it is generally seen that every child is closed to their mother because mother is the only one person who always stands by their children either child is a trouble or something else problem is happening with their child.
I tend to think that of course mother have greater role in raising children up because mostly children spend their time with mother and mother is making them learn many thing with growing children in their life. Fathers get time less time to spend the time with their children because he has their own responsibilities to make the children eat and accomplish the needs etc.
Generally speaking, others claim that men are just as good as women at parenting so it could be correct if men spend the most of time with their children. Although a child recognizes by the name of father but his such kind of things credit goes to mother like a child is healthy though. Men also have a hand to the extent of children's development.
To conclude the topic, parents have different responsibilities and role to make their children prepare for future but both are important for children to get succeed and have different parenting style. In the end I would say that both of them are the same aim to make their children life easy for growing up to future.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 165, Rule ID: MANY_NN[1]
Message: Possible agreement error. The noun thing seems to be countable; consider using: 'many things'.
Suggestion: many things
... mother and mother is making them learn many thing with growing children in their life. Fa...
^^^^^^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, so, kind of, of course
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 7.85571142285 25% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 26.0 24.0651302605 108% => OK
Preposition: 32.0 41.998997996 76% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 8.3376753507 12% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1202.0 1615.20841683 74% => OK
No of words: 253.0 315.596192385 80% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.75098814229 5.12529762239 93% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.98822939669 4.20363070211 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.61961423267 2.80592935109 93% => OK
Unique words: 127.0 176.041082164 72% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.501976284585 0.561755894193 89% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 367.2 506.74238477 72% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 16.0721442886 56% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 28.0 20.2975951904 138% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 56.3836067586 49.4020404114 114% => OK
Chars per sentence: 133.555555556 106.682146367 125% => OK
Words per sentence: 28.1111111111 20.7667163134 135% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.11111111111 7.06120827912 58% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.255780826416 0.244688304435 105% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.127013891488 0.084324248473 151% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.104321175631 0.0667982634062 156% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.167844600411 0.151304729494 111% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0761826375087 0.056905535591 134% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.0 13.0946893788 115% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 51.52 50.2224549098 103% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.0 11.3001002004 115% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.57 12.4159519038 85% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.02 8.58950901804 82% => OK
difficult_words: 32.0 78.4519038076 41% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 18.0 9.78957915832 184% => OK
gunning_fog: 13.2 10.1190380762 130% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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