Many people believe that women make better parents than men and that this is why they have the greater role in raising children in most societies. Others claim that men are just as good as women at parenting. Write an essay expresing your point of view.
Throughout the human history, women are known as the one who does the most works in upbringing their children. On the contrary, men, who take on he of breadwinners, are mainly busy outside the home to earn money for the whole family. this doesn’t mean that men are not important in childcare and housework. Both mothers and fathers have a profound influence on children growth. But women have proven themselves superior parents with several reasons.
first of all, women are born with hospitality and patience. they also appear to be less aggressive than boys. In the past, men are the one who are likely to be aggressors in crime and in war. Undoubtedly, the one who is more patient and gentle would preferable to a more aggressive one. Although there certainly exist gentle men and cruel women, in general, females are less likely to be violent solving problems.
Second of all, raising kids has become female instinct for centuries, according to scientists. women are the first one who learned about nurturing when they are just little girls. girls see the way their mothers raising offspring. And naturally, girls identify this as women’s activity. they take care of their own dolls and later with their younger siblings. boys, in contrast, tend to be attractted with thrilling things such as adventures, games, sports,etc not nurturing.
Finally, it is inevitable that women tend to be better communicators than men. Many studies attach that girls tend to speak earlier and with greater complexity than boys of the same age. Furthermore, Sarah Skerik, the vice president of social at PR Newswire, says that “The best communicators, in my opinion, are people who have a lot of empathy for their audience, and can deliver what their audience needs,”. women are effective listeners so they are likely to empathize better.
To sum up, while there are some opinion claim that men and women are equal in upbringing their children, I firmly believe that women are better at parenting than men with their patience, instinct and communicating skills.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, finally, first, furthermore, if, second, so, while, in contrast, in general, such as, first of all, in my opinion, on the contrary, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 22.0 13.1623246493 167% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 7.85571142285 25% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 10.4138276553 125% => OK
Relative clauses : 13.0 7.30460921844 178% => OK
Pronoun: 25.0 24.0651302605 104% => OK
Preposition: 43.0 41.998997996 102% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1747.0 1615.20841683 108% => OK
No of words: 340.0 315.596192385 108% => OK
Chars per words: 5.13823529412 5.12529762239 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.29407602571 4.20363070211 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.72107467829 2.80592935109 97% => OK
Unique words: 200.0 176.041082164 114% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.588235294118 0.561755894193 105% => OK
syllable_count: 531.9 506.74238477 105% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 0.809619238477 371% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 8.0 4.76152304609 168% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 21.0 16.0721442886 131% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 20.2975951904 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 47.4461145601 49.4020404114 96% => OK
Chars per sentence: 83.1904761905 106.682146367 78% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.1904761905 20.7667163134 78% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.2380952381 7.06120827912 103% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 11.0 5.01903807615 219% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 8.67935871743 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 3.4128256513 176% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.280409221698 0.244688304435 115% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0820799909542 0.084324248473 97% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0636553275329 0.0667982634062 95% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.170186621051 0.151304729494 112% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0645031997308 0.056905535591 113% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.9 13.0946893788 83% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 55.24 50.2224549098 110% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 11.3001002004 84% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.24 12.4159519038 99% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.7 8.58950901804 101% => OK
difficult_words: 92.0 78.4519038076 117% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 5.5 9.78957915832 56% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.1190380762 83% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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