It is generally accepted that families are not as close as they used to be. Give some reasons
why this change has happened. Include any relevant examples from your experience. You
should write at least 250 words.
These days, it is so clear that, in fact, family ties are becoming weaker and not as close as
before. This is evidently true in Western countries. To my knowledge, there are some reasons that
cause this unwanted problem. And, I firmly believe that we should change our mindsets, goals
and lifestyles.
It is true that a family that gets along well with each other tend to be closer and vice versa.
Great changes of the world have increased the gap between family members. For centuries,
social competition is increasing significantly. People have to spend lots of time working with
great efforts, in order to be successful, or to simply to have a decent life. And thus, they hardly
make time for their families. It seems that in people’s minds, devoting a huge amount of time to
work is more important than improving the bonds of kinship.
In the past, children learned everything mostly from their parents. Therefore, this allowed them
to spend more time with families. Now, parents are sending their 1, 2, and 3-year-old children to
daycare and pre-schools 4-10 hours a day 5-6 days a week. We also are living in the age of
individualism. Most everyone wants to be independent. People can do anything they want to
achieve their goals. For instance, many youths tend to leave their parents at an early age to
study and work in another city or country to find a better education, jobs or living standards. As
the result, children have less and less affection and love to their families.
Moreover, the terrific development of technological equipment is blurring the relationships of
families. Most of the young spend their leisure time engaging in screen-time activities such as
watching television, playing games, surfing the internet, etc. By the time, they lead a sedentary
lifestyle and lose their interest in chatting with their family members. So, family members
cannot understand each other, they will not know how to show their affection and they have less
caring for each other. Of course, family relationship will be weakened. A family is like a plant.
If we don’t take of the plant or give anything it needs, the plant will die.
In conclusion, we have to give our love and spend more time on our families to make sure that
families can be maintained forever. For members of families, who live far away from the other,
let’s contact their families as usual as possible.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, if, moreover, so, therefore, thus, well, for instance, in conclusion, in fact, of course, such as, it is true
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 13.1623246493 122% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 16.0 10.4138276553 154% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 41.0 24.0651302605 170% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 53.0 41.998997996 126% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2036.0 1615.20841683 126% => OK
No of words: 408.0 315.596192385 129% => OK
Chars per words: 4.99019607843 5.12529762239 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.49433085973 4.20363070211 107% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.67629102321 2.80592935109 95% => OK
Unique words: 228.0 176.041082164 130% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.558823529412 0.561755894193 99% => OK
syllable_count: 606.6 506.74238477 120% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 12.0 5.43587174349 221% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 4.0 0.809619238477 494% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 9.0 4.76152304609 189% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 27.0 16.0721442886 168% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 20.2975951904 74% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 36.9704586774 49.4020404114 75% => OK
Chars per sentence: 75.4074074074 106.682146367 71% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.1111111111 20.7667163134 73% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.25925925926 7.06120827912 60% => OK
Paragraphs: 26.0 4.38176352705 593% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 15.0 8.67935871743 173% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 9.0 3.4128256513 264% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.129315972806 0.244688304435 53% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0379553427361 0.084324248473 45% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.028519828646 0.0667982634062 43% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0364310359276 0.151304729494 24% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0297979374898 0.056905535591 52% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.6 13.0946893788 73% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 64.71 50.2224549098 129% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.0 11.3001002004 71% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.07 12.4159519038 89% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.67 8.58950901804 89% => OK
difficult_words: 85.0 78.4519038076 108% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 5.5 9.78957915832 56% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 8.0 10.1190380762 79% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.7795591182 74% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum five paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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