IT IS UNDOUBTEDLY TRUE THAT COMPUTERS' DEPENDEENCY HAS INCREASED TO A LARGE EXTENT IN SCHOOLS ALL OVER THE DEVELOPED WORLD. MANY OF THE USEFUL READING AND WRITING SKILLS ARE VANISHING AT A HIGH PACE. I TOTALLY AGREE WITH THE VIEW THAT PEDAGOGUES NEED TO REINVENT THE PAST TEACHING WAYS TO PREVENT THE COMPLETE EXTINCTION OF THESE SKILLS.
FIRST, LOOKING AT THE READING PART, WITH THE USE OF COMPUTERS FOR READING MANY SUBJECTS LIKE LITERATURE HISTORY AND SOCIAL SCIENCE , KIDS ARE NO LONGER USED TO INCULCATE THE HABIT OF READING PAPERBACK NOVELS. AS A RESULT IF THEY WILL NOT READ, THEY WILL NEVER KNOW THE IMPORTANCE OF WRITNG A LITERATURE AS WELL. SO , NEXT GENERATION WILL FACE SCARCITY OF NOT ONLY THE ADMIRERS OF LITERATURE BUT LEGENDS OF WRITING AS WELL.
SECOND, WRITNG IS ALSO LOSING ITS PECULIER SHINE IN THE FORM OF CURSIVE WRITING. RESEARCHERS HAVE ALREADY RAISED A CAUTION THAT COMPUTER TYPING AT JUNIOR LEVEL STUDY IS TAKING AWAY CURSIVE WRITING SKILLS AT A VERY FAST PACE FROM THE YOUNG GENERATIONS. DUE TO THIS MANY OCCAISONS LIKE BIRTHDAYS AND CEREMONIES, WHERE PEOPLE NEED TO EXPRESS THEIR VIEWS AND WISHES WITH STYLISH PRINTS WOULD VANISH. MOREOVER, MANY A TIMES, WHEN COMPUTER IS NOT ACCESIBLE CHANCES OR WRITING WITHOUT SPELLING ERRORS WOULD BE VERY HIGH, AS COMPUTERS HAVE AUTO CORRECTION MODE AND STUDENTS WOULD NEVER TRY TO LEARN THEM.
TO CONCLUDE, I STRONGLY BELIEVE THAT SCHOOL TEACHERS SHOULD ADOPT OLD TEACHING HABITS OF PROMOTING PAPERBACK READING AND WRITING. OTHERWISE NEXT GENERATION WOULD NEVER SEE ACCOMPLISHED WRITERS AND LITERARY SCHOLARS.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 124, Rule ID: MANY_NN[1]
Message: Possible agreement error. The noun OF seems to be countable; consider using: 'MANY '.
Suggestion: MANY
...N SCHOOLS ALL OVER THE DEVELOPED WORLD. MANY OF THE USEFUL READING AND WRITING SKILLS ...
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Line 1, column 142, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... THE DEVELOPED WORLD. MANY OF THE USEFUL READING AND WRITING SKILLS ARE VANISHING...
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Line 1, column 286, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... NEED TO REINVENT THE PAST TEACHING WAYS TO PREVENT THE COMPLETE EXTINCTION OF TH...
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Line 3, column 131, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
...KE LITERATURE HISTORY AND SOCIAL SCIENCE , KIDS ARE NO LONGER USED TO INCULCATE TH...
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Line 3, column 315, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
...TANCE OF WRITNG A LITERATURE AS WELL. SO , NEXT GENERATION WILL FACE SCARCITY OF N...
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Line 5, column 43, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...COND, WRITNG IS ALSO LOSING ITS PECULIER SHINE IN THE FORM OF CURSIVE WRITING. RE...
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Line 5, column 182, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...ING AT JUNIOR LEVEL STUDY IS TAKING AWAY CURSIVE WRITING SKILLS AT A VERY FAST PA...
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Line 5, column 300, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...O THIS MANY OCCAISONS LIKE BIRTHDAYS AND CEREMONIES, WHERE PEOPLE NEED TO EXPRESS...
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Line 7, column 131, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[1]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: OTHERWISE,
...ROMOTING PAPERBACK READING AND WRITING. OTHERWISE NEXT GENERATION WOULD NEVER SEE ACCOMPL...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, if, look, moreover, second, so, well, as a result
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 13.1623246493 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 7.85571142285 127% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 14.0 24.0651302605 58% => OK
Preposition: 33.0 41.998997996 79% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1325.0 1615.20841683 82% => OK
No of words: 258.0 315.596192385 82% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.13565891473 5.12529762239 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.00778971557 4.20363070211 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.58423474761 2.80592935109 92% => OK
Unique words: 165.0 176.041082164 94% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.639534883721 0.561755894193 114% => OK
syllable_count: 404.1 506.74238477 80% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 42.3408785927 49.4020404114 86% => OK
Chars per sentence: 110.416666667 106.682146367 104% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.5 20.7667163134 104% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.58333333333 7.06120827912 79% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 9.0 5.01903807615 179% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.221556616058 0.244688304435 91% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0718202788283 0.084324248473 85% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0493090999858 0.0667982634062 74% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.12846820496 0.151304729494 85% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0593418573528 0.056905535591 104% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.5 13.0946893788 103% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 50.16 50.2224549098 100% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 11.3001002004 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.53 12.4159519038 101% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.0 8.58950901804 116% => OK
difficult_words: 87.0 78.4519038076 111% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.