Schooling is no longer necessary, since more and more information is accessible on the internet and students can study just as well at home. to what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement
Education is the most essential part of a student's life since it assists in forming their character. Although It is often said that there is no need of schooling as the internet has all the information available which a student requires, I strongly disagree with the statement above because schooling can play a significant role in certain ways. This essay will discuss the reasons why schooling is still important in the age of the internet.
IT is worth considering that the environment can be an imperative reason for a student. With regards to schooling, a student can interact with other children and teachers which can help them in developing skills such as communication or confidence. On the contrary, studying at home through the internet will not assist students in developing expertise due to a lack of interaction. Evidently, recent research of "The New York City" has found that people who are learning privately at home consumes a lot of time for searching specific area owing to lack of skills of searching and therefore they end up wasting time while studying.
Furthermore, It is universally accepted that the internet has an excessive amount of information which can cause a student to stuck at a particular topic he or she is investigating which can be again time-consuming. Hence, I believe that students always need someone who can guide them and undoubtedly, schooling is the best place for them. In addition, teachers as a guide can also examine students to evaluate their performances and provide them feedback to get improved for the next time, however, this is not the case in studying privately since there is no one to test a student.
To sum up, it goes without saying that learning through the Internet has a myriad of advantages and it can be significant for a student in many ways, I strongly believe that schooling can be more beneficial in terms of molding a character of a student which internet is helpless to do.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 43, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[1]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'students'' or 'student's'?
Suggestion: students'; student's
...ucation is the most essential part of a students life since it assists in forming their ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, furthermore, hence, however, if, so, still, therefore, while, in addition, such as, on the contrary, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 13.1623246493 122% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 14.0 7.85571142285 178% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 14.0 7.30460921844 192% => OK
Pronoun: 27.0 24.0651302605 112% => OK
Preposition: 46.0 41.998997996 110% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.3376753507 108% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1644.0 1615.20841683 102% => OK
No of words: 331.0 315.596192385 105% => OK
Chars per words: 4.9667673716 5.12529762239 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.26537283232 4.20363070211 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.95201258323 2.80592935109 105% => OK
Unique words: 175.0 176.041082164 99% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.528700906344 0.561755894193 94% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 510.3 506.74238477 101% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 5.43587174349 147% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 16.0721442886 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 30.0 20.2975951904 148% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 70.2598482847 49.4020404114 142% => OK
Chars per sentence: 149.454545455 106.682146367 140% => OK
Words per sentence: 30.0909090909 20.7667163134 145% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.5454545455 7.06120827912 149% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.301175450373 0.244688304435 123% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.113812647149 0.084324248473 135% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0542431437849 0.0667982634062 81% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.186808274059 0.151304729494 123% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0319552648151 0.056905535591 56% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 17.0 13.0946893788 130% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 49.49 50.2224549098 99% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.8 11.3001002004 122% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.14 12.4159519038 98% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.75 8.58950901804 102% => OK
difficult_words: 76.0 78.4519038076 97% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.78957915832 117% => OK
gunning_fog: 14.0 10.1190380762 138% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.7795591182 130% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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