Education system does not focus on contemporary real business areas by allowing studying more traditional subjects which are not appropriate for the requirements of the market. This essay will definitely agree with this idea, because students need to learn more realistic practical subjects for their future life and have more time to engage with sport rather than wasting their time overloading with inadequate knowledge.
First of all, schools have to teach practical lessons rather than old subjects which are not required in the modern working world. It will be more useful for them to build a strong career in their future life and they will adapt easily to the business environment too. For example, according the researches carried by Oxford University, only 30% of the subjects match to realistic demands of the nowadays work conditions due the technological development and necessity creating new specialties.
In addition to this, students have to be busy with sport activities too. It is very crucial for their health psychically and also mentally. To be engaged with sport or gym, they need more time, so the education system must set up their education schedule by taking into account these factors. Because unless they pay attention their health condition, it will impact on their future life conditions adversely and the quality of work environment also will decrease.
In conclusion, schools have to increase more realistic subjects related with modern working world by teaching them more practical skills which adapt to nowadays and also provide students with more leisure time for sport activities by reducing the traditional subjects.
- Advantages and disadvantages of mobile phones in our daily lives 67
- What problems have mass media created nowadays Can you come up with the solutions for these problems 89
- You and your friend are planning a picnic in the countryside Write Which arrangements have you already done Other activities that can be done How can your friend help with the arrangements 78
- Big salary is much more important than job satisfaction Do you agree or disagree Provide relevant examples if necessary 73
- Big salary is much more important than job satisfaction Do you agree or disagree Provide relevant examples if necessary 73
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, if, so, for example, in addition, in conclusion, first of all
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 13.1623246493 46% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 7.30460921844 41% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 19.0 24.0651302605 79% => OK
Preposition: 35.0 41.998997996 83% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.3376753507 108% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1402.0 1615.20841683 87% => OK
No of words: 261.0 315.596192385 83% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.37164750958 5.12529762239 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.0193898071 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.67478506149 2.80592935109 95% => OK
Unique words: 139.0 176.041082164 79% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.532567049808 0.561755894193 95% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 431.1 506.74238477 85% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 16.0721442886 62% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 26.0 20.2975951904 128% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 64.3233239191 49.4020404114 130% => OK
Chars per sentence: 140.2 106.682146367 131% => OK
Words per sentence: 26.1 20.7667163134 126% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.4 7.06120827912 105% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.181698600129 0.244688304435 74% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0823335655231 0.084324248473 98% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0589736720504 0.0667982634062 88% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.133542823711 0.151304729494 88% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0593534028634 0.056905535591 104% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.9 13.0946893788 129% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 36.63 50.2224549098 73% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 14.6 11.3001002004 129% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.16 12.4159519038 114% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.1 8.58950901804 106% => OK
difficult_words: 69.0 78.4519038076 88% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.5 9.78957915832 148% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.4 10.1190380762 123% => OK
text_standard: 15.0 10.7795591182 139% => OK
What are above readability scores?
---------------------
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
---------------------
Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.