It is undeniably true that both staying physically fit and maintaining a healthy lifestyle is the prime priority for humankind. Since time immemorial a significant majority of educational establishments included sports period as a subject in their curriculum, however, nowadays this is not happening because of technical subjects. In my opinion, it would be great to include these to educate children in terms of personal health and being hygiene.
Both sociologists and fitness experts are claiming that there are a plethora of benefits by including these in school studies. The first and foremost point is related to personal hygiene. To elaborate this, by attending these classes pupils would develop new habits such as washing hands, eating at regular intervals, as well as the importance of living in a hygiene environment. As a result, they not only maintain an organized lifestyle but also learn to be personally clean. A recent survey conducted in Japan reveals that there was a smaller number of children who were suffered from contagious viruses because of maintaining personal cleanliness.
The second point to be highlighted is that associated with physical fitness. By doing sport at a regular interval enables children to be not only physically strong but also mentally strong. In addition to these, tutees who are fit could be more productive and active compared to the students who are not strong. Moreover, by playing a variety of games or by participating in different competitions would add a whole new dimension to their portfolio and eventually make them more employable in different sectors. Hence financial stability and career growth can be promised at later stages of life.
To conclude, although regular studies are required, it is highly essential to consider more fitness classes for students because of all the above-mentioned advantages for instance leading a healthy lifestyle, staying strong and be productive.
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- Women are better at childcare than men therefore they should focus more on raising children and lesson their working life To what extents do you agree or disagree with this statement 73
- Schools should do more to teach students about their health and well being Do you agree or disagree 84
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 513, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[1]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Hence,
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, hence, however, if, moreover, second, so, well, for instance, in addition, such as, as a result, as well as, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 21.0 13.1623246493 160% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 18.0 24.0651302605 75% => OK
Preposition: 42.0 41.998997996 100% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1642.0 1615.20841683 102% => OK
No of words: 306.0 315.596192385 97% => OK
Chars per words: 5.3660130719 5.12529762239 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.18244613648 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.99926657417 2.80592935109 107% => OK
Unique words: 183.0 176.041082164 104% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.598039215686 0.561755894193 106% => OK
syllable_count: 521.1 506.74238477 103% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 8.0 4.76152304609 168% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 52.7144792873 49.4020404114 107% => OK
Chars per sentence: 117.285714286 106.682146367 110% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.8571428571 20.7667163134 105% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.0 7.06120827912 142% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 8.67935871743 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.15412588258 0.244688304435 63% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0462197325292 0.084324248473 55% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0354769338672 0.0667982634062 53% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0852740657624 0.151304729494 56% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0400580260252 0.056905535591 70% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.8 13.0946893788 113% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 41.7 50.2224549098 83% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.7 11.3001002004 112% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.87 12.4159519038 112% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.99 8.58950901804 116% => OK
difficult_words: 103.0 78.4519038076 131% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 9.78957915832 123% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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