Nowadays, thousands of institutes teaching different skills to their students and they are very hopeful for a better future also parents should train their children to learn different work.
Firstly, I strongly agree with the notion, schools should pay attention to academics and prepare their students to perform well in examinations and get good grades. for instance, there are a lot of institutes which are giving training in different fields of life such as, cookery, woodwork and many others skills which can help them to succeed in their lives. However, nowadays parents are also working for their children day and night for their better career they don't have enough time to give lesson children on different life skills which are useful for them.
Furthermore, all things considered, friends are also stuck in their daily routines they don't have much time to give lessons on useful skills. In addition, governments should focus on these types of schools which are teaching different art of life and also spend a huge amount, it should be free of cost governments bear all expenses. In other words, globally authorities spend big amount this kind of schools because they make sensible citizens who work hard for their country.
It is impossible for schools to concentrate on both fields because they are different if they try to work on dual challenges might be difficult to perform well so schools should restrict their syllabus.
I conclude with, institutes are trying to make money more money than their rivals so they make effort to continue with many challenges at the same time.however, it could be harmful. In a way, schools pay attention to the academic and final terms of students.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, firstly, furthermore, however, if, so, well, for instance, in addition, kind of, such as, in other words
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 26.0 24.0651302605 108% => OK
Preposition: 37.0 41.998997996 88% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1428.0 1615.20841683 88% => OK
No of words: 281.0 315.596192385 89% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.08185053381 5.12529762239 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.09427095027 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.52730682671 2.80592935109 90% => OK
Unique words: 153.0 176.041082164 87% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.544483985765 0.561755894193 97% => OK
syllable_count: 418.5 506.74238477 83% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 16.0721442886 62% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 28.0 20.2975951904 138% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 37.7477151626 49.4020404114 76% => OK
Chars per sentence: 142.8 106.682146367 134% => OK
Words per sentence: 28.1 20.7667163134 135% => OK
Discourse Markers: 11.7 7.06120827912 166% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 9.0 5.01903807615 179% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.182652239136 0.244688304435 75% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.084635803657 0.084324248473 100% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0551884376697 0.0667982634062 83% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.109587023213 0.151304729494 72% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0222338352395 0.056905535591 39% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.5 13.0946893788 126% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 51.52 50.2224549098 103% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.0 11.3001002004 115% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.48 12.4159519038 101% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.06 8.58950901804 94% => OK
difficult_words: 54.0 78.4519038076 69% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 13.5 9.78957915832 138% => OK
gunning_fog: 13.2 10.1190380762 130% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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