Science tells us about the activities which are good for our health and others which are bad. Millions of people all over the world know this and still do unhealthy activities. Why do you think this is the case and what can be done to change it?
Scientific studies proved the good and bad habits of our health. Even though, peoples are neglected to obey that and doing the same before. This essay will first suggest the problem behind this phenomenon is being optimistic and tight working schedule and submit the solution as health education.
People are over confident about their health and not interested to exhort from others. Such as, every one thinks that diseases are always for others not for our self. Owing to the fact that, people all over the world has eaten unhealthy foods like fast food, junk foods and so on. While some others are thinks, life is to be enjoy. For instance, youth are usually saying "do whatever you can, and eat whatever you want". Furthermore,some people are object to others order to follow or often denial the issues as well . Such communities are behave against the rules and treat themselves as a hero such as, smokers and drinkers.
The ultimate solution to the fact that, inculcate every individual from the childhood. Proper education regarding the health issues and the causative factors must be taught including the families. Each families must have a proper guide to distinguish the good and bad habits. At once, educational institutions must implement habitual therapies and echo friendly activities at preliminary age. Additionally, conduct classes and lectures about daily exercise and disease causing behavior globally allotted days.
To conclude, people are often disobedient and continue to do the things which they are impressive rather than the benefit. Changes must be start from the beginning and instruct every one frequently in every year and every nation.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , some
...at whatever you want'. Furthermore,some people are object to others order to fo...
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Line 3, column 484, Rule ID: ALLOW_TO[1]
Message: Did you mean 'following'? Or maybe you should add a pronoun? In active voice, 'order' + 'to' takes an object, usually a pronoun.
Suggestion: following
...,some people are object to others order to follow or often denial the issues as well . Su...
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Message: Don't put a space before the full stop
Suggestion: .
...ollow or often denial the issues as well . Such communities are behave against the...
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Message: Consider using a past participle here: 'behaved'.
Suggestion: behaved
...e issues as well . Such communities are behave against the rules and treat themselves ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, furthermore, if, regarding, so, well, while, for instance, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 13.1623246493 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 18.0 10.4138276553 173% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 13.0 24.0651302605 54% => OK
Preposition: 27.0 41.998997996 64% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1416.0 1615.20841683 88% => OK
No of words: 269.0 315.596192385 85% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.26394052045 5.12529762239 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.0498419064 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.58428297957 2.80592935109 92% => OK
Unique words: 174.0 176.041082164 99% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.646840148699 0.561755894193 115% => OK
syllable_count: 439.2 506.74238477 87% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 5.43587174349 18% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 16.0721442886 106% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 20.2975951904 74% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 24.4471041159 49.4020404114 49% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 83.2941176471 106.682146367 78% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.8235294118 20.7667163134 76% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.29411764706 7.06120827912 61% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.4128256513 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.287622265103 0.244688304435 118% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0712645050377 0.084324248473 85% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0447962361389 0.0667982634062 67% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.145594129855 0.151304729494 96% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0640873607051 0.056905535591 113% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.3 13.0946893788 86% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 56.25 50.2224549098 112% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 11.3001002004 81% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.93 12.4159519038 104% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.25 8.58950901804 108% => OK
difficult_words: 83.0 78.4519038076 106% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 10.1190380762 79% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.7795591182 74% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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