Scientific research is carried out and controlled by the governments rather than the private companies
Do you agree or disagree?
Fortunately, the past half century has seen dramatic increase in the number of scientific researches in different areas. While some people like me heavily believe that these investigations must be performed and controlled by the government, others strongly disagree with them and have their own justifications and think the researches would be more successful if conducted by the private companies. this essay will argue about this issue as follows.
Firstly, the absolutely vital factor in every research is covering the cost including the facilities like laboratory, raw materials and the wage of employees. Undoubtedly, the governments in various parts of the word allocate a huge amount of money to universities and other research institutes. The companies just can support a little scientific groups due to limited budget, however some corporation make annually several agreements with state centers to collaborate with each other. Besides, in term of control of the researches conducted by scientists the governmental sector can play a key role rather than private centers.
Secondly, the corporations have had a considerable contributions in carrying out of the surveys and have accelerated the rate of producing of science. this section can properly takes advantage of official`s supports especially in the control of the project. The FDA as a state organization seriously supervises the projects associated with food and pharmacy.
In conclusion, in my point of view the government should majorly launch the facilities and supply the equipments as well as accurate control on the projects. Also, the private companies can play a subsidiary role to ready themselves for further investigations in the future.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, but, first, firstly, however, if, second, secondly, so, well, while, in conclusion, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 3.0 13.1623246493 23% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 1.0 7.30460921844 14% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 10.0 24.0651302605 42% => OK
Preposition: 38.0 41.998997996 90% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1473.0 1615.20841683 91% => OK
No of words: 263.0 315.596192385 83% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.60076045627 5.12529762239 109% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.02706775958 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.190691836 2.80592935109 114% => OK
Unique words: 169.0 176.041082164 96% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.642585551331 0.561755894193 114% => OK
syllable_count: 459.9 506.74238477 91% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 7.0 2.52805611222 277% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 52.728602822 49.4020404114 107% => OK
Chars per sentence: 122.75 106.682146367 115% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.9166666667 20.7667163134 106% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.08333333333 7.06120827912 129% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.229610721883 0.244688304435 94% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0660783379601 0.084324248473 78% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0550395096354 0.0667982634062 82% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.114557516967 0.151304729494 76% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0387966015886 0.056905535591 68% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.9 13.0946893788 121% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 41.7 50.2224549098 83% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.7 11.3001002004 112% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 15.2 12.4159519038 122% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.02 8.58950901804 117% => OK
difficult_words: 89.0 78.4519038076 113% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.78957915832 117% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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