The scientist believes that computers will become more intelligent than human beings. Some people find it is positive while others think it is a negative development. Discuss both points and give your own opinion.
In today's world, the use of computers is ever increasing.It is one of the most important things in human life. It became a common part of modern society. Scientists think that it will become smarter than human. Some people discover that it is a positive trend, but others have a negative attitude towards this dependency on computers. This essay will discuss the benefits and drawbacks of such a measure.
One of the main beneficial developments of computers is that it made life easier and more convenient for everybody. For example, it is comfortable to sit at home and do research on the internet with your computer. Your computer is open 24 hours a day, unlike a library or office. In addition, computer technology can connect workers in different countries. Workers can communicate via email, online networks, and video conferencing. It gives people to save their time and money. Computers have automated the offices, education, banking, even the advancement of treatment and crime detection were possible due to the powerful computer technology. These examples make it clear that it is a positive increase in human life.
On the other hand, this development has its disadvantages. It can lead to the loss of the balance in society. For instance, offices will be disappearing in the future and virtual online offices may replace them. Therefore, people will become very lazy which is crucial to the way in which human develop without socialisation skills. They move toward the creation of higher unemployment. That's way there will appear two groups: humans and computer technologies.
To conclude, it is the beneficial development for human life, however, it impacts badly as well. I strongly believe that there are many advantages in the way of development and we should take advantages of it. We have made the computers and as human, we will control them.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, however, if, may, so, therefore, well, for example, for instance, in addition, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 7.85571142285 140% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 10.4138276553 115% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 33.0 24.0651302605 137% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 33.0 41.998997996 79% => OK
Nominalization: 12.0 8.3376753507 144% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1565.0 1615.20841683 97% => OK
No of words: 307.0 315.596192385 97% => OK
Chars per words: 5.09771986971 5.12529762239 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.18585898806 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.88596775012 2.80592935109 103% => OK
Unique words: 182.0 176.041082164 103% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.592833876221 0.561755894193 106% => OK
syllable_count: 507.6 506.74238477 100% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 15.0 5.43587174349 276% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 22.0 16.0721442886 137% => OK
Sentence length: 13.0 20.2975951904 64% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 30.7906822871 49.4020404114 62% => OK
Chars per sentence: 71.1363636364 106.682146367 67% => OK
Words per sentence: 13.9545454545 20.7667163134 67% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.59090909091 7.06120827912 65% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 3.4128256513 205% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.259046555685 0.244688304435 106% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0669304294861 0.084324248473 79% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0678611733602 0.0667982634062 102% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.149700973948 0.151304729494 99% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0677825770652 0.056905535591 119% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.6 13.0946893788 73% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 49.82 50.2224549098 99% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 11.3001002004 84% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.71 12.4159519038 94% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.55 8.58950901804 100% => OK
difficult_words: 83.0 78.4519038076 106% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 9.78957915832 72% => OK
gunning_fog: 7.2 10.1190380762 71% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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