Scientists agree that many people eat too much junk food and it is damaging their health. Some people think that this problem can be solved by educating people, while others believe that education will not work.
Discuss both views and give your own opinion.
Overeating junk food often comes in tandem with unhealthier body. While one school of thought advocates that teaching people could curb the growing rate of eating fast foods, many still believe that educating is not practical way. This essay will look at both sides and draw a concluding opinion.
To begin with this, educating people with the aim of preventing them for eating fast-foods, which are more common practice among young generation, has been useless. In other words, this bad eating habits are due to the hurry and flurry of this modern life. For example, cooking is time-consuming for the majority of people such as duel income parents, university students, researchers and as a result, they have tendency to rush home or restaurant and gulp down their meals to be in time for this or that program. In sum, whether educating them or not, they have not extra time for cooking and indirectly show tendency toward fast food.
On the other hand, educating people play significant role in the healthy lifestyle. Over the world, half of the people suffer from the obesity which result in a vast array of diseases and this trend is because of the having low knowledge about the ingredients of junk foods. For instance, statistics reveal that two third of people after so excessive consumption of low calory foods found that they have put their body on the verge of damage, which often cause untreatable disease. In short raising the awareness of people by education, which my sentiment is on pair with this opinion, protect the majority of people from risky life through eating organic foods so excessive rather than junk foods.
In conclusion, some people based on their job position and other reasons have to eat fast foods, while others consume junk foods beyond the having knowledge about its severe effects on their health. This essay discussed why educating people is looked at with superiority. In my opinion, the majority of people are not familiar with the severe effects of junk foods on their life long health, and they should be educated.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, look, so, still, third, while, for example, for instance, in conclusion, in short, such as, as a result, in my opinion, in other words, to begin with, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 7.85571142285 38% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 27.0 24.0651302605 112% => OK
Preposition: 56.0 41.998997996 133% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1713.0 1615.20841683 106% => OK
No of words: 347.0 315.596192385 110% => OK
Chars per words: 4.93659942363 5.12529762239 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.31600926901 4.20363070211 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.43162439866 2.80592935109 87% => OK
Unique words: 193.0 176.041082164 110% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.556195965418 0.561755894193 99% => OK
syllable_count: 525.6 506.74238477 104% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 8.0 4.76152304609 168% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 24.0 20.2975951904 118% => OK
Sentence length SD: 60.9794210855 49.4020404114 123% => OK
Chars per sentence: 122.357142857 106.682146367 115% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.7857142857 20.7667163134 119% => OK
Discourse Markers: 12.2857142857 7.06120827912 174% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 8.67935871743 46% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.9879759519 150% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.32100826631 0.244688304435 131% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.122510158264 0.084324248473 145% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0505617071148 0.0667982634062 76% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.216894066931 0.151304729494 143% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0603530945498 0.056905535591 106% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.2 13.0946893788 108% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 55.58 50.2224549098 111% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 11.3001002004 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.67 12.4159519038 94% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.33 8.58950901804 97% => OK
difficult_words: 77.0 78.4519038076 98% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.1190380762 115% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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