Now-a-days computers have become man's best assistants in every aspect of life including every field he works in.They brought rapid revolution in the way we work and amplified our efficiency and accuracy.This is the main reason that many scientists think to develop this technology to the next level where it can be used to a large extent.
A single computer can even outnumber a group of people in accomplishing an assigned task.The former is the main reason for preferring computers over man power.For example,lets take business management into account,one of the toughest thing is maintaining accounts and financial affairs of a business.All this was before the invention of the great tech.But now it is as easy as running a knife through butter with the help of computers.
One more advantage is time efficient error free output.Most of the people in the present scenario believe that time is money. Lesser the errors, higher will be the profit.computers outweigh humans in both of these aspects.Moreover they make rectification of mistakes a cake-walk.All these aspects have been declaring the prominence of computers in day to day life.Hence some scientists are trying to develop it as a super power superior to humans.
We should not forget the major aspect that these are just one of those electronic gadgets man created.The main feature that differentiate human from computer is intelligence.Computers lack intelligence.They cannot decide whats good and what is not and just process a given command to generate output.They may be faster and smarter than us,but we are the one who commands them.
Being too dependent on one thing brings problems to our doors.As computer is one of the complex machines its better to use it in a situation where humans cant help.So,viewing all the above cited information computers can do wonders if we command and operate them perfectly.
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- People in all modern societies use drugs but today s youth are experimenting with both legal and illegal drugs and at an increasingly early age Some sociologists claim that parents and other members of society often set a bad example Discuss the causes an 67
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, hence, if, may, moreover, so, for example
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 18.0 13.1623246493 137% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 30.0 24.0651302605 125% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 37.0 41.998997996 88% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.3376753507 108% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1588.0 1615.20841683 98% => OK
No of words: 304.0 315.596192385 96% => OK
Chars per words: 5.22368421053 5.12529762239 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.17559525986 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.22907041974 2.80592935109 115% => OK
Unique words: 193.0 176.041082164 110% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.634868421053 0.561755894193 113% => OK
syllable_count: 500.4 506.74238477 99% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 0.0 4.76152304609 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 6.0 16.0721442886 37% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 50.0 20.2975951904 246% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 97.6486047007 49.4020404114 198% => OK
Chars per sentence: 264.666666667 106.682146367 248% => Less chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 50.6666666667 20.7667163134 244% => Less words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 7.66666666667 7.06120827912 109% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 37.0 5.01903807615 737% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.204592388777 0.244688304435 84% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0934831564692 0.084324248473 111% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0356928529041 0.0667982634062 53% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.102062340068 0.151304729494 67% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0452620934906 0.056905535591 80% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 28.5 13.0946893788 218% => Automated_readability_index is high.
flesch_reading_ease: 20.73 50.2224549098 41% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 13.0 7.44779559118 175% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 22.8 11.3001002004 202% => Flesch kincaid grade is high.
coleman_liau_index: 13.88 12.4159519038 112% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.53 8.58950901804 123% => OK
difficult_words: 85.0 78.4519038076 108% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 29.5 9.78957915832 301% => Linsear_write_formula is high.
gunning_fog: 22.0 10.1190380762 217% => Gunning_fog is high.
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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