Sending criminals to prison is the best method of dealing with them. Education and job training are better way to help tem. Do you agree or disagree?
Some people claim that we should provide criminals with education and job training instead of putting them into prison. While it is true that education and job training are effective to some extent, I believe that the best way to handle them is to send them to prison.
To begin with, there are some benefits of giving education and job training for offenders. First, Because many people becoming criminals due to the wrong perception of the law, education could help them be able to distinguish between legal and illegal actions so as to avoid returning to crimes in the future. Second, Vocational training equips offenders with reasonable and sufficient knowledge, which enhances their likelihood of having jobs to earn money without working illegally for it. If they can not get a job after released back into society, they easily commit crimes again to make ends meet.
However, I believe that the most effective measure is to put criminals into prison. The first reason is that imprisonment acts as a deterrent, which drives people who intend to commit crimes less likely to actually perform illegal acts. For example, people could give up their intention when they know that they will face the loss of freedom if they carry out such a criminal act. The other reason is that being a danger to society, serious offenders deserve to serve enough period of time in prison for the safety of society. As a result, inhabitants could walk on the streets or relax in their house more safety.
In Conclusion, imprisonment is the best method to tackle criminal issues, whereas education and training play a role as a supplement measure.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 260, Rule ID: SO_AS_TO[1]
Message: Use simply 'to'
Suggestion: to
...guish between legal and illegal actions so as to avoid returning to crimes in the future...
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Line 3, column 475, Rule ID: PERIOD_OF_TIME[1]
Message: Use simply 'period'.
Suggestion: period
...rious offenders deserve to serve enough period of time in prison for the safety of society. As...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
actually, first, however, if, second, so, whereas, while, as to, for example, in conclusion, as a result, it is true, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 11.0 7.30460921844 151% => OK
Pronoun: 24.0 24.0651302605 100% => OK
Preposition: 40.0 41.998997996 95% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 8.3376753507 120% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1361.0 1615.20841683 84% => OK
No of words: 276.0 315.596192385 87% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.93115942029 5.12529762239 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.07593519647 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.50677249019 2.80592935109 89% => OK
Unique words: 163.0 176.041082164 93% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.590579710145 0.561755894193 105% => OK
syllable_count: 426.6 506.74238477 84% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 23.0 20.2975951904 113% => OK
Sentence length SD: 38.2712359351 49.4020404114 77% => OK
Chars per sentence: 113.416666667 106.682146367 106% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.0 20.7667163134 111% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.9166666667 7.06120827912 155% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 3.9879759519 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.277513395217 0.244688304435 113% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.107005412809 0.084324248473 127% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.10245349608 0.0667982634062 153% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.194048101408 0.151304729494 128% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.11675000638 0.056905535591 205% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.3 13.0946893788 102% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 56.59 50.2224549098 113% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.3001002004 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.61 12.4159519038 94% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.15 8.58950901804 95% => OK
difficult_words: 59.0 78.4519038076 75% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 9.78957915832 143% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.1190380762 111% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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