The shortage of housing in big cities can cause severe consequences, and only government action can solve the problem. To what extent do you agree or disagree?
In contemporary society, the lack of accommodations has lead to a number of profound impacts, hence, prompting a belief that only actions can the governments can mitigate the problems. Personally, I concur with the statement.
To begin with, lacking of residence have been determined to be the roots of several negativities in modern era. First, when housing in major cities becomes insufficient, it can damage the environment, potentially leaving certain adverse effects to the residents. To explain, a huge number of people living in populous areas will raise the demand for houses, thus, increasing the costs of accommodation as there is a limitation in living space of a city. Therefore, those who are money-conscious will seek alternatives, such as moving to suburbs while maintaining their current job in metropolises. This means that they may have to travel back and forth by their own vehicle, putting a rise of transportation on the streets and subsequently causing traffic jams. As a consequence, larger volume of transport can increase CO2 emissions, sabotage the atmosphere and eventually leading to air pollution. For instance, in New York, due to the fact that accommodations in this destination are considered extravagant, many have decided to resettle in the outskirts despite long-distance travel on a daily basis. This has polluted the atmosphere in this cities as New Yorkers have a tendency to commute by their own vehicles, which are often operated by fossil fuels, the main culprit of excessive CO2 emissions.
Apart from the abovementioned practical concerns, government certainly plays an essential role in dealing with this issue. A possible approach for the government is to reinvest in the construction for underdeveloped areas, in terms of infrastructures and facilities. In order words, developing regions can attract business expansion from corporations , creating heaps of employment opportunities. Even more importantly, once residents are aware of the existence of new residential areas, they may choose to relocate for employment, therefore, reducing the pressure of housing in areas with highly - dense population. For example, in recent years, because the government has spent a considerable budget in building remote areas, there has been a great number of people from Ho Chi Minh city, an incredibly crowded city, moving to other provinces for job search and resettlement.
Taking everything into consideration, while it is undeniable that the shortage of accommodations have been attached to serious consequences, the government’s role in eradicating this issue should be highly emphasised.
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Suggestion: who is a are
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, hence, may, so, therefore, thus, while, apart from, for example, for instance, such as, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 7.85571142285 127% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 10.4138276553 48% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 19.0 24.0651302605 79% => OK
Preposition: 64.0 41.998997996 152% => OK
Nominalization: 21.0 8.3376753507 252% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2238.0 1615.20841683 139% => OK
No of words: 403.0 315.596192385 128% => OK
Chars per words: 5.55334987593 5.12529762239 108% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.48049772903 4.20363070211 107% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.33822594753 2.80592935109 119% => OK
Unique words: 244.0 176.041082164 139% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.605459057072 0.561755894193 108% => OK
syllable_count: 702.0 506.74238477 139% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 6.0 2.52805611222 237% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 8.0 4.76152304609 168% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 25.0 20.2975951904 123% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 51.3209493652 49.4020404114 104% => OK
Chars per sentence: 139.875 106.682146367 131% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.1875 20.7667163134 121% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.75 7.06120827912 96% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.9879759519 150% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.4128256513 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.13459790067 0.244688304435 55% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0420294604827 0.084324248473 50% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0512452592607 0.0667982634062 77% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0914514951789 0.151304729494 60% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0529900044601 0.056905535591 93% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 17.3 13.0946893788 132% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 37.64 50.2224549098 75% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 14.2 11.3001002004 126% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 15.21 12.4159519038 123% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.21 8.58950901804 119% => OK
difficult_words: 136.0 78.4519038076 173% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 9.78957915832 123% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.0 10.1190380762 119% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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