Should animals be used in testing new drugs and procedures?
-Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.
In many places it is allowed to test some species of animals in order to get helpful results, medicines and vaccines. As a result, most scientists tend to use animals as projects to make specific experiences. This essay will discuss the reasons which allow animals be used in testing new drugs and procedures.
There are three main reasons why animals are used in researches. Firstly, animals are used in research when there are no other ways to do experiments. In other words, if experts have to apply biological studies and no choices are founded, it will be allowed to use them as alternatives. Secondly, people and animals share hundreds of illnesses, so animals often act as models for the study of human disease. For instance, mice suffer from many of the same cancers that afflict people that’s why animals are used for cancer research and models to study diseases. Thirdly, to protect the safety of people and animals, new medicines require testing because researchers must measure both the beneficial and the harmful effects of a compound on a whole organism.
Researchers have to test extensively to prevent “Vaccine enhancement” a situation in which a vaccine actually makes the disease worse in some people. Moreover, scientists racing to develop a vaccine for Coronavirus during 2020 global pandemic need to test on genetically modified mice to ensure that the vaccine doesn’t make the virus worse. As a famous person said, testing a coronavirus vaccine on animals is “Absolutely essential” and skipping that step would be “fraught with difficulty and danger”. However, in countries such as: UK and UE, this is written into law and it is illegal to use an animal in research where there is a practical solution.
To put it in a nutshell, I pen down saying that, the use of animals in some forms of biomedical research remains essential to the discovery of the causes, treatments of disease and suffering in humans and animals. Equally significant, if we didn’t use them, we would have to test new drugs on people which leads their lives to be risky and in danger.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
actually, first, firstly, however, if, moreover, second, secondly, so, third, thirdly, for instance, such as, as a result, in other words
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 13.1623246493 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 10.4138276553 134% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 7.30460921844 137% => OK
Pronoun: 17.0 24.0651302605 71% => OK
Preposition: 52.0 41.998997996 124% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 8.3376753507 36% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1757.0 1615.20841683 109% => OK
No of words: 351.0 315.596192385 111% => OK
Chars per words: 5.0056980057 5.12529762239 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.32839392791 4.20363070211 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.80081469397 2.80592935109 100% => OK
Unique words: 190.0 176.041082164 108% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.541310541311 0.561755894193 96% => OK
syllable_count: 558.9 506.74238477 110% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 23.0 20.2975951904 113% => OK
Sentence length SD: 41.9297825736 49.4020404114 85% => OK
Chars per sentence: 117.133333333 106.682146367 110% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.4 20.7667163134 113% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.13333333333 7.06120827912 129% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 7.0 5.01903807615 139% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 8.67935871743 35% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 10.0 3.9879759519 251% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.222973130432 0.244688304435 91% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0838955577527 0.084324248473 99% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0522071812973 0.0667982634062 78% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.14449968459 0.151304729494 96% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0427594093298 0.056905535591 75% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.9 13.0946893788 106% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 48.13 50.2224549098 96% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 11.3001002004 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.07 12.4159519038 97% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.05 8.58950901804 105% => OK
difficult_words: 95.0 78.4519038076 121% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.1190380762 111% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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