Should government regulate the fast food industries in the same way that regulates the drug, alcohol and tobacco industries.
Many people claim that the government should regulate the fast food industries in the same way that regulates the drug, alcohol, tobacco industries. I agree with this idea. It’s not only harmful to our health but also does not make sure hygiene.
Fast food is harmful to our health, especially our children. Firstly, the components of them have too much oil, flavor, and additives, which easily make diseases. It can lead to obesity, high-pressure blood, or serious cancer. Secondly, it doesn’t have enough nutrition for our body to develop. We are likely to lack nutrition; Moreover, in its ingredients, there have materials that make addiction. We are so uneasy to hold back our appetite. For instance, in 1980 in England, there had a girl who just ate potatoes for life. She ate about 70 kg of potatoes at an average rate daily. As the result, she is obese now. Her weight reached 170 kg when she was 21 years old. She can’t be able to stand up or going around. For this reason, we have to ban the industry’s activities.
Moreover, we don’t know exactly that fast food is clear or not. These food are made by some companies which maybe don’t have any permit. Also, we do not know if the ingredients of this food are unfresh. Do we know if the worker doesn’t take the gloves or wash their hands before working? As I remembered, I saw a worm in a bread I had just bought in the lovely morning in the past. It’s so disgusting.
In conclusion, I think the government should prohibit the business activity of the fast-food industry. It is not suitable for eating at any time of the day.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, if, may, moreover, second, secondly, so, for instance, i think, in conclusion, in the same way
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 10.4138276553 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 37.0 24.0651302605 154% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 30.0 41.998997996 71% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1319.0 1615.20841683 82% => OK
No of words: 285.0 315.596192385 90% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.62807017544 5.12529762239 90% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.10876417139 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.59147452771 2.80592935109 92% => OK
Unique words: 177.0 176.041082164 101% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.621052631579 0.561755894193 111% => OK
syllable_count: 401.4 506.74238477 79% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.60771543086 87% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 18.0 5.43587174349 331% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 23.0 16.0721442886 143% => OK
Sentence length: 12.0 20.2975951904 59% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 28.3470258623 49.4020404114 57% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 57.347826087 106.682146367 54% => More chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 12.3913043478 20.7667163134 60% => More words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 5.26086956522 7.06120827912 75% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.9879759519 150% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 12.0 3.4128256513 352% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.240298375509 0.244688304435 98% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0571618217098 0.084324248473 68% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.160285126889 0.0667982634062 240% => The coherence between sentences is low.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.191057517893 0.151304729494 126% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.197306132106 0.056905535591 347% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 6.6 13.0946893788 50% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 76.22 50.2224549098 152% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 5.6 11.3001002004 50% => Flesch kincaid grade is low.
coleman_liau_index: 8.69 12.4159519038 70% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.5 8.58950901804 87% => OK
difficult_words: 59.0 78.4519038076 75% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 5.5 9.78957915832 56% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 6.8 10.1190380762 67% => OK
text_standard: 7.0 10.7795591182 65% => The average readability is low. Need to imporve the language.
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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