Should Women be Allowed in the Army
As scale of feministic movement is rapidly expanding nowadays , plethora of men
argue that women should also join the military to indicate equality. This essay will
consider arguments against women joining army and point to some of the
reasons with these views.
To begin with, one of the numerous stumbling blocks is women's physical
fitness. From a scientific standpoint, female gender is substantially weaker than
male one. Military life may be indeed challenging to handle and it may deteriorate
woman's health so that in future she might have difficulties with pregnancy or
even in daily life. Men possess physical strength and stamina to endure hardships
that are faced in military in comparison with women. Moreover, if women will join
the army, who will look after home and children? Women are home-keepers, men
are guardians and breadwinners ; it was set since the early times.
Second factor to take into account is women's psychological state. Females
are not only physically delicate but also emotionally. Women might be subjected
to pressure from men or even assaulted during military life. Harsh conditions may
result in mental instability.Moreover, disasters and terrors that may occur during
potential war may disrupt women's psychology.
On the other hand, looking back to Kazakh history may show us that
women are capable of serving in the army. The most prominent examples are
Manshuk Mametova and Asiya Moldagulova who were sergeant and corporal
respectively during Second World War. They were both the only Kazakh women
awarded the title " Hero of the Soviet Union for their courage and patriotism.
Therefore, I suppose that enlisting in the military for women should be voluntary.
All things considered, it can be concluded that women should be allowed to
pursue military career if they have appropriate physical and mental training.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
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Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 18.0 13.1623246493 137% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 15.0 7.85571142285 191% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 10.4138276553 125% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 18.0 24.0651302605 75% => OK
Preposition: 36.0 41.998997996 86% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 8.3376753507 12% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1615.0 1615.20841683 100% => OK
No of words: 295.0 315.596192385 93% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.47457627119 5.12529762239 107% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.14434120667 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.82637020467 2.80592935109 101% => OK
Unique words: 188.0 176.041082164 107% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.637288135593 0.561755894193 113% => OK
syllable_count: 504.9 506.74238477 100% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 16.0721442886 106% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.2975951904 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 32.8977655135 49.4020404114 67% => OK
Chars per sentence: 95.0 106.682146367 89% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.3529411765 20.7667163134 84% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.0 7.06120827912 85% => OK
Paragraphs: 25.0 4.38176352705 571% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 9.0 5.01903807615 179% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 3.9879759519 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.339833940164 0.244688304435 139% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0979447306634 0.084324248473 116% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0924537170176 0.0667982634062 138% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0821400761613 0.151304729494 54% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.115464306793 0.056905535591 203% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.0 13.0946893788 99% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 45.76 50.2224549098 91% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.3001002004 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.15 12.4159519038 114% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.67 8.58950901804 113% => OK
difficult_words: 97.0 78.4519038076 124% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.1190380762 87% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum five paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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