It has long been recognized that smoking is one of the negative factors which leads to severe diseases and death all over the world in recent years. Developing laws regarding banning cigarettes and other tobacco products is considered to be the responsibility of the government to protect public health. As far I am concerned, there is a wide range of reasons for us to make an agreement with this notion.
For smokers themselves, after smoking for a long time, their health has to face several negative consequences. First, they would have shorter longevity in comparison with normal people. Reseach has proved smokers lose about ten years of their life and one-half of the smokers eventually died because of their addiction. Second, smoking can increase the risk of health deterioration, leading to serious illnesses such as lung cancer or bronchitis. It is reported that smoking accounts for one-third of respiratory deaths and over a quarter of cancer deaths.
Moreover, smoking not merely has negative impacts on smokers but also second-handed smokers as well. Having said that for children who have smokers in their family or live near the smoking areas, it will increase the likelihood of being affected by heart or lung diseases for 25%. Women who are pregnant are also one of the victims of cigarettes smoke, it may affect her baby which results in mental diseases like Down disease.
Although smoking has aroused people concern in our present world, the government still haven't developed any laws relating to this situation, cigarettes, and other tobacco products' manufactures still locate in several countries and produce thousands of cigarettes packets for profit every day.
In the light of these facts, I believed that this is why the government should take cigarettes ban into account. This can not only provide the citizen with better living standard but also helps them to prevent severe illness which caused by smoking.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, if, may, moreover, regarding, second, so, still, third, well, as to, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 25.0 24.0651302605 104% => OK
Preposition: 44.0 41.998997996 105% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1643.0 1615.20841683 102% => OK
No of words: 315.0 315.596192385 100% => OK
Chars per words: 5.21587301587 5.12529762239 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.21286593061 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.65942705863 2.80592935109 95% => OK
Unique words: 192.0 176.041082164 109% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.609523809524 0.561755894193 109% => OK
syllable_count: 500.4 506.74238477 99% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 5.43587174349 147% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 50.1353270699 49.4020404114 101% => OK
Chars per sentence: 117.357142857 106.682146367 110% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.5 20.7667163134 108% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.71428571429 7.06120827912 95% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 3.9879759519 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.202120364812 0.244688304435 83% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0694461374581 0.084324248473 82% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.063746588509 0.0667982634062 95% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.114657247737 0.151304729494 76% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0439089611472 0.056905535591 77% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.4 13.0946893788 110% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 49.15 50.2224549098 98% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 11.3001002004 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.29 12.4159519038 107% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.84 8.58950901804 103% => OK
difficult_words: 82.0 78.4519038076 105% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.78957915832 117% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.