Social media is becoming increasingly popular amongst all age groups. However, sharing personal information on social media websites does have risks.
Do you think that the advantages of social media outweigh the disadvantages?
These day the lives of people from different ages are closely connected more then in the past by social media due to their ease of use. With excellent features of some applications and websites, people now would like to share their own stories and experiences to the world to have them known and admired though it is actually risky to reveal some of your private information on the internet. There are a range of opinions on whether social media have caused many problems in our life or not but personally I believe that social media still have more benefits on human's living than the drawbacks because they provide us with a boundless discover of global trend and convenient means of communication.
It could be argued that social media lead people especially teenagers to addiction; however, this problem is caused by misuse which i not the main aim of social media's goals. In fact, these online platforms are to help people access new information and contents being shared around the world. For example, we can know and support the campaign #metoo which is created to against sexual harassment in women and Twitter one of popular platforms is the great tool to spread this project.
One of social media's advantages is today people have various channels to connect to each other. By the easily accessible of social-online applications, we do not have to wait for weeks to receive responses from our family or relatives living in another side of the world. This worldwide connectivity, therefore, is the reason answering an importance of social platforms towards our life.
In conclusion, everything surrounding us has both advantages and disadvantages. Yet, we as a human being should figure out the balance point of them to avoid making mistakes and to use them wisely.
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- Social media is becoming increasingly popular amongst all age groups. However, sharing personal information on social media websites does have risks.Do you think that the advantages of social media outweigh the disadvantages? 84
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 1, Rule ID: THIS_NNS[2]
Message: Did you mean 'this day' or 'These days'?
Suggestion: This day; These days
These day the lives of people from different ages...
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Line 1, column 78, Rule ID: COMP_THAN[2]
Message: Comparison requires 'than', not 'then' nor 'as'.
Suggestion: than
...fferent ages are closely connected more then in the past by social media due to thei...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
actually, but, however, if, so, still, then, therefore, for example, in conclusion, in fact
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 10.4138276553 115% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 26.0 24.0651302605 108% => OK
Preposition: 50.0 41.998997996 119% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1484.0 1615.20841683 92% => OK
No of words: 298.0 315.596192385 94% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.97986577181 5.12529762239 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.15483772266 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.70775220164 2.80592935109 97% => OK
Unique words: 183.0 176.041082164 104% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.614093959732 0.561755894193 109% => OK
syllable_count: 468.0 506.74238477 92% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 5.43587174349 147% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 16.0721442886 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 27.0 20.2975951904 133% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 66.8029048708 49.4020404114 135% => OK
Chars per sentence: 134.909090909 106.682146367 126% => OK
Words per sentence: 27.0909090909 20.7667163134 130% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.27272727273 7.06120827912 117% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.307639464448 0.244688304435 126% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.110499973755 0.084324248473 131% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0936679211243 0.0667982634062 140% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.166849136449 0.151304729494 110% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0891228988014 0.056905535591 157% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.6 13.0946893788 119% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 44.07 50.2224549098 88% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.8 11.3001002004 122% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.9 12.4159519038 96% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.0 8.58950901804 105% => OK
difficult_words: 76.0 78.4519038076 97% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 18.0 9.78957915832 184% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.8 10.1190380762 126% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.