Social media is becoming popular among all age groups. Moreover, sharing information on social media websites does have risks. Do advantages outweigh disadvantages?
Nodoubt, nowadays social media is becoming most popular among all age groups. People share their personal information to others on it. But sometimes it create a risk for them. This essay intends to highlight the merits and demerits in further paragraphs.
The prominent pros is consisdered is communication. With the aid of social apps masses contact with their near or dear one's who living far away from. Owing to this, they do not feel homesickness. To add on, with the help of social media businessman attend their mettings sitting at home through video calls.
Moreover, through social apps people can show their status symbol to others by updating photos and videos on media. With the assist of it they also learn the culture and lifestyle of other nations. Last but not the least, individuals also make new friends on it.
On the flip side, there are some disadvantages of share information on social media. Firstly, sometimes people share their personal information on media to others but unfortunately their information is disclosed by the hackers on social media which may be harmful for them. Secondly, owing to this crime rates are also witnessed in the world.
To conclude, on social media people contact their near and dear one's and show their status symbols to others on it. Not only share personal information on it by dwellers but sometimes it also create a risk for them. Owing to this, crime rates are also incresed in the nation.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, if, may, moreover, second, secondly, so, well
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 13.1623246493 61% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 7.85571142285 25% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 7.30460921844 27% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 24.0 24.0651302605 100% => OK
Preposition: 43.0 41.998997996 102% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1208.0 1615.20841683 75% => OK
No of words: 245.0 315.596192385 78% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.9306122449 5.12529762239 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.95632099841 4.20363070211 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.55746125679 2.80592935109 91% => OK
Unique words: 126.0 176.041082164 72% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.514285714286 0.561755894193 92% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 371.7 506.74238477 73% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 11.0 4.76152304609 231% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 16.0721442886 106% => OK
Sentence length: 14.0 20.2975951904 69% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 34.7816719823 49.4020404114 70% => OK
Chars per sentence: 71.0588235294 106.682146367 67% => OK
Words per sentence: 14.4117647059 20.7667163134 69% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.23529411765 7.06120827912 60% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.284461912929 0.244688304435 116% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0945491777037 0.084324248473 112% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.113816399163 0.0667982634062 170% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.178121452884 0.151304729494 118% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0887172052335 0.056905535591 156% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.0 13.0946893788 69% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 65.73 50.2224549098 131% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.6 11.3001002004 67% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.72 12.4159519038 86% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.68 8.58950901804 89% => OK
difficult_words: 52.0 78.4519038076 66% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 5.0 9.78957915832 51% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 7.6 10.1190380762 75% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.7795591182 74% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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