the issue as to whether it is beneficial for society to ban all forms of advertisements or leaflets on the street and forms of platforms because of their detrimental impacts has remained a source of controversy. I consider that it is both pros and cons to this notion.
the purpose of advertising indeed is to inform people of the types of products that suit their daily needs. Therefore, people are aware of different choices when they shop. A surge of advertisements through online platforms makes customer's attraction. Advertisements contain information about the features, the sales, and the product's utilization so that buyers can contemplate and compare the most reasonable purchases, Besides, the greater demand for advertising in nowaday's highly competitive market can be the main contributor to enhance the company' images as well as prestigious values. However, advertising only manipulates people into buying certain items because each people have own priorities and calculations, and customers only buy the most suitable items for their situation.
However, many forms of advertising nowadays are becoming more and more misguided and manipulative. In terms of business, Large companies usually spend a huge amount of money creating civil services that encourage clients to use a particular product or wear a particular outfit to look modern and fashionable. For example, Apple can enhance some functions and purposes to attract people to use all those products through advertising. As a result, this can lead to an imbalance of world technology as well as economic downturns. Furthermore, in terms of recreation, some methods to market on Youtube or game websites fired a lot of sexually explicit advertisements regardless of age or gender. This can result in harmful progress for youngsters and each government should propose some stringent regulations and ban all these forms of advertising.
In conclusion, advertising also plays a vital role in all aspects of life. This creates a huge amount of opportunities to shop and suit for own styles and characteristics. And I believe that advertising is manipulating people into the faith.
- Some people think that people who choose a job early and keep doing it are more likely to have a satisfying career life than those who frequently change jobs To what extent do you agree or disagree 61
- It is important for children to learn the difference between right and wrong at an early age Punishment is necessary to help them learn this distinction To what extent do you agree or disagree with this opinion What sort of punishment should parents and t 84
- Nowadays many people choose to be self employed rather than to work for a company or organisation Why might this be the case What could be the disadvantages of being self employed 73
- The society would benefit from a ban on all forms of advertising because it serves no useful purpose and can even be damaging To what extent do you agree or disagree with this opinion 84
- Living in a country where you have to speak a foreign language can serious social problems as well as practical problems To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement 89
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: nowadays is used without 'in'. Use simply: 'nowadays'.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, but, furthermore, however, if, look, so, therefore, well, as to, for example, in conclusion, as a result, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 13.1623246493 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 19.0 10.4138276553 182% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 19.0 24.0651302605 79% => OK
Preposition: 44.0 41.998997996 105% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.3376753507 108% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1814.0 1615.20841683 112% => OK
No of words: 337.0 315.596192385 107% => OK
Chars per words: 5.38278931751 5.12529762239 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.28457229495 4.20363070211 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.16607894095 2.80592935109 113% => OK
Unique words: 189.0 176.041082164 107% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.560830860534 0.561755894193 100% => OK
syllable_count: 574.2 506.74238477 113% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 5.0 2.52805611222 198% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 0.809619238477 371% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 73.2499733362 49.4020404114 148% => OK
Chars per sentence: 113.375 106.682146367 106% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.0625 20.7667163134 101% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.1875 7.06120827912 116% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.01903807615 100% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.198092126971 0.244688304435 81% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0622472159873 0.084324248473 74% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0436771305814 0.0667982634062 65% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.125767325568 0.151304729494 83% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0393963872786 0.056905535591 69% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.4 13.0946893788 110% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 41.7 50.2224549098 83% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.7 11.3001002004 112% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.92 12.4159519038 112% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.41 8.58950901804 110% => OK
difficult_words: 101.0 78.4519038076 129% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 9.78957915832 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.7795591182 130% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.