In today's highly competitive market, There have been many primary factors to guarantee a career prospects in the near future. And Having an approved fact that Rural people are catching up the trendy that moving to cities in order to be a high-salary job and can lead to the overpopulation in many countries. In my opinion, these arguments are both pros and cons in nowadays. I will list my justifications in the below essay that follows.
On the one hand, Commuting to urban areas can be some radical reasons for employees who always strive for a career promotion. Firstly, This tendency is one of the attractive marketing campaigns of mutual companies. For example, Companies may require them with all what they have both in terms of attitude and expertise, Employers give a employee welfare as well as a high-salary job in comparison with those in the countryside. Contemporarily, it meets he condition of facitlities and the greater demand for them in today's propensity.
On the other hand, Coexistence with those benefits are high potential risks. With a surge of immigration towards cities, This can lead to the loss of population and the imbalance of economic growth. For example, when human resources allocate in industries and other range of fields are too much in the city, it will gradually lead to an overabundance of labour force, causing spontaneous risks such as unemployment, economic's inflation, and GDP's shortcomings,...Moreover, it may also be a double-edge sword for participants to commit themselves in some international organizations, which ten applicants sign out and one of which can assign this position because of too fierce competition.
In conclusion, The emigration of urban peoples to cities can have both disadvantages and advantages by those above aforementioned ideas. And I firmly believe that it brings them with benefits when really have enough underlying characteristics to result in the success.
- Living in a country where you have to speak a foreign language can serious social problems as well as practical problems To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement 89
- Some people think it is more important to spend money on roads and motorways than on public transport systems To what extent do you agree 89
- The society would benefit from a ban on all forms of advertising because it serves no useful purpose and can even be damaging To what extent do you agree or disagree with this opinion 84
- It is important for people to take risks both in their professional lives and their personal lives Do you think the advantages of taking risks outweigh the disadvantages 78
- It is better for college students to live far away from home than live at home with their parents Do you agree or disagree 78
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, firstly, if, may, moreover, really, so, well, for example, in conclusion, such as, as well as, in my opinion, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 13.1623246493 68% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 25.0 24.0651302605 104% => OK
Preposition: 51.0 41.998997996 121% => OK
Nominalization: 13.0 8.3376753507 156% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1626.0 1615.20841683 101% => OK
No of words: 311.0 315.596192385 99% => OK
Chars per words: 5.22829581994 5.12529762239 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.19942759058 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.32747250672 2.80592935109 119% => OK
Unique words: 185.0 176.041082164 105% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.594855305466 0.561755894193 106% => OK
syllable_count: 514.8 506.74238477 102% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 0.809619238477 371% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 23.0 20.2975951904 113% => OK
Sentence length SD: 107.117753047 49.4020404114 217% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 125.076923077 106.682146367 117% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.9230769231 20.7667163134 115% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.7692307692 7.06120827912 153% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 10.0 5.01903807615 199% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0847519662118 0.244688304435 35% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0293851569466 0.084324248473 35% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0414703908177 0.0667982634062 62% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0520837393202 0.151304729494 34% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0318719821536 0.056905535591 56% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.2 13.0946893788 116% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 39.67 50.2224549098 79% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.4 11.3001002004 119% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.35 12.4159519038 108% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.75 8.58950901804 114% => OK
difficult_words: 98.0 78.4519038076 125% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.1190380762 111% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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