Nowadays, in some parts of the United States a new law has been imposed, in order to protect youth. According to this new rule, teenagers are not allowed to go out alone, after a specific hour at night. While some individuals believe these kinds of laws are adverse for teenagers' self-esteem and independence, others claim that the benefits of such laws are uncountable. I personally agree with the second argument because of various rationales and in continuation I will attempt to elaborate about this topic.
In our contemporary epoch, thanks to the advancement of our societies, this chance is given to us to be aware of diverse ways for protecting our nearest and dearest. Unfortunately different types of crimes are occured in all societies. By knowing this bitter fact, legislators are responsible to impose some protective laws to keep the balance in each community. Undoubtedly, parents and guardians should follow the rules and cooperate with governments for perfectly performing all aspects of laws.
In the light of this protective law, not only are offenders kept away from our offsprings, but also youth do not experience some criminal activities.
It is evident that by leaving adolescents unshielded, they get involved in juvenile delinquencies. Additionally, without supportive laws, they are exposed to be abused by some criminal adults. For instance, they may suffer from sexual assault or drug addiction or bullying.
Notwithstanding, obvious advantages of these types of laws, some people are against them. They believe that, during the golden period of adolescence, self-esteem is formed. They explain this law acts like a deterrent factor for this purpose.
Despite their claim, a vast panel of psychological experts illustrate that by doing different extra curricular activities, teenages practice various aspects of real life. By performing these programs, training them is readily feasible.
To recapitulate, teens should be prepared to enter actual life and they must be educated for this aim. However, never should be forgotten that the foremost duty of governments and parents is creating a sane and safe ambiance to perfectly nurture our next generation.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Suggestion:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, however, if, may, second, so, while, for instance
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 19.0 13.1623246493 144% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 34.0 24.0651302605 141% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 54.0 41.998997996 129% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 8.3376753507 132% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1854.0 1615.20841683 115% => OK
No of words: 343.0 315.596192385 109% => OK
Chars per words: 5.40524781341 5.12529762239 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.30351707066 4.20363070211 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.01807715358 2.80592935109 108% => OK
Unique words: 214.0 176.041082164 122% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.623906705539 0.561755894193 111% => OK
syllable_count: 585.0 506.74238477 115% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 5.43587174349 147% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 12.0 4.76152304609 252% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 19.0 16.0721442886 118% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 35.5676562588 49.4020404114 72% => OK
Chars per sentence: 97.5789473684 106.682146367 91% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.0526315789 20.7667163134 87% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.15789473684 7.06120827912 45% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 7.0 4.38176352705 160% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.4128256513 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.190560455228 0.244688304435 78% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0545349922676 0.084324248473 65% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0522408189205 0.0667982634062 78% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0823085008576 0.151304729494 54% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0407282383879 0.056905535591 72% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.1 13.0946893788 100% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 44.75 50.2224549098 89% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 11.3001002004 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.8 12.4159519038 111% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.46 8.58950901804 110% => OK
difficult_words: 107.0 78.4519038076 136% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 9.78957915832 123% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum five paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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