In some areas of the US a curfew is imposed in which teenagers are not allowed to be outdoors after a particular time at night unless they are accompanied by an adult.
What is your opinion about this?
A curfew is imposed by an adolescent who is not allowed to be outside their home after a certain hour of the night if they are not associated with an adult in area of the us. this a crucial issue to ensure their safety and prevent them in some detrimental activities.
many people are aware of the importance of safety risks while around their homes and communities. some feel that this happened during late nights after finishing their studies in school. As such some areas have a higher crime rate than other countries. In fact, an estimated 2.2 million children ages 14 and under are injured in school-related accident each year, according to the National safe KIDS Campaign in the us. many people living in a developed country like America frequently as a parent tend to work hard in the workplace to fulfil their daily lives high-cost living standard and there is no time to give attention to children when they in outside their home to avoid common school sport injuries and also after the children finish their school such as the miscreants and paedophiles are usually operate at night it becomes serious issue for them and their parents. Whereas, if teens are inside their houses in the night or are going out with adult or parent then they are safe as an abuser. Subsequently, this will reduce the cases of kidnap or rape.
How to tackle this problem? The government should give information on social media such as banner, pamphlet and to protect them in the public while the children lost or hang out with their friends after finishing school. Therefore, peers usually play a huge role at the stage of harmful effect in order to influence them to be aware of smoking, alcohol and drug use well before adult from discussion at school. For instance, A recent study Havard University found that the key risk periods for drug abuse occur during major transitions in children’s lives, with a minority number of children by age 14 or 15 found that they are more likely to be involved with substance abuse. However, there are protective factors that can suppress the escalation to substance abuse. that is to say, protective family structure, individual personality, and environmental variables can reduce the impact of serious risks of drug abuse. As a result, preventive interventions can provide skills and support to high-risk youth to enhance levels of protective factors and prevent escalation to drug abuse.
us; mso-bidi-language:AR-SA">To conclude, I think the rule of staying indoors in the night on teenagers is a significant step for the safety of not only our teens but also our society. The implementation of this rule will undoubtedly bring changes needed for the betterment of the country.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
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Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 17.0 13.1623246493 129% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 18.0 10.4138276553 173% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 34.0 24.0651302605 141% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 76.0 41.998997996 181% => OK
Nominalization: 13.0 8.3376753507 156% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2294.0 1615.20841683 142% => OK
No of words: 458.0 315.596192385 145% => Less content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.00873362445 5.12529762239 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.62611441266 4.20363070211 110% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.93962693773 2.80592935109 105% => OK
Unique words: 245.0 176.041082164 139% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.534934497817 0.561755894193 95% => OK
syllable_count: 717.3 506.74238477 142% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 5.0 2.52805611222 198% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 16.0721442886 112% => OK
Sentence length: 25.0 20.2975951904 123% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 94.5432816162 49.4020404114 191% => OK
Chars per sentence: 127.444444444 106.682146367 119% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.4444444444 20.7667163134 123% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.5 7.06120827912 106% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 9.0 5.01903807615 179% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 10.0 3.9879759519 251% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.201879045245 0.244688304435 83% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0642907890776 0.084324248473 76% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0768509682617 0.0667982634062 115% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.144963546559 0.151304729494 96% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.100558591243 0.056905535591 177% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.9 13.0946893788 114% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 46.1 50.2224549098 92% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.0 11.3001002004 115% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.07 12.4159519038 97% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.7 8.58950901804 101% => OK
difficult_words: 111.0 78.4519038076 141% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.0 10.1190380762 119% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.