Some believe that people today have no interest in maintaining the traditional culture of their country or region. other believe that it is still important to people that we preserve a traditional way of life. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.
Some people consider that it is not important to keep traditional culture of country or region while others believe that people do not need to preserve traditional way of life. There exist both advantages and disadvantages of it which I will be showing with some examples down below.
To begin with, every country has its own traditions such as regional, celebrational or weddings and so on. According to several reasons most people think it is main part of their culture. First of all, without knowing their past, especially ancestors' traditions it is impossible to imagine how to people developed over the years. Because traditions are in people's blood and it can effect their behaviours and characters. Secondly, as I mentioned before there exist different traditions in every country. It means that keeping traditions tells about that particular country and its specifications. Last reason that people have religious traditions which can hold them together and save from doing some bad stuff.
In other hand, there are some disadvantages as well. For instamce, if people preserve traditional culture of life, it may lead to non-developing. People can not experience new type of things because of traditional rules. The another reason that it is hard to keep traditions in nowadays because of developing and modernisationing in every field. It also depends on people themselves.
In conclusion, some people prefer to have their traditions in every day life while others think it is not important as other factors. In my opinion there are both pros and cons of it but we should never forget about our past and traditions.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 276, Rule ID: IN_NOWADAYS[1]
Message: nowadays is used without 'in'. Use simply: 'nowadays'.
Suggestion: nowadays
...ason that it is hard to keep traditions in nowadays because of developing and modernisation...
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Line 7, column 60, Rule ID: ANINFOR_EVERY_DAY[1]
Message: Did you mean 'in everyday'?
Suggestion: in everyday
... people prefer to have their traditions in every day life while others think it is not impor...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, if, may, second, secondly, so, well, while, in conclusion, such as, first of all, in my opinion, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 13.1623246493 68% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 10.4138276553 115% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 30.0 24.0651302605 125% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 42.0 41.998997996 100% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 8.3376753507 12% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1368.0 1615.20841683 85% => OK
No of words: 265.0 315.596192385 84% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.16226415094 5.12529762239 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.03470204552 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.91992089897 2.80592935109 104% => OK
Unique words: 150.0 176.041082164 85% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.566037735849 0.561755894193 101% => OK
syllable_count: 429.3 506.74238477 85% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 20.2975951904 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 32.9065319314 49.4020404114 67% => OK
Chars per sentence: 85.5 106.682146367 80% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.5625 20.7667163134 80% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.0 7.06120827912 113% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 2.0 8.67935871743 23% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 9.0 3.4128256513 264% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.429319632395 0.244688304435 175% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.13795825191 0.084324248473 164% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.111164801776 0.0667982634062 166% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.283007255554 0.151304729494 187% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0671748694344 0.056905535591 118% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.2 13.0946893788 86% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 55.24 50.2224549098 110% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 11.3001002004 84% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.35 12.4159519038 99% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.47 8.58950901804 87% => OK
difficult_words: 51.0 78.4519038076 65% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.78957915832 117% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.1190380762 83% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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