Some believe that people today have no interest in maintaining the traditional culture of their country or region. Others believe that it is still important to people that we preserve a traditional way of life.
Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.
the question of cultural significance has been an important question, a question that has been asked ever since the formation of the first tribes tens of thousands of years ago, and despite globalization and the world becoming more and more accepting with other cultures, this question remains as prevalent as It was so long ago, this essay will discuss both views, however, I wholeheartedly believe that culture is a critical part of any nation and thereby must be preserved
one example opponents of cultural significance might say is that the current generation does not care about preserving our culture, and that preserving culture harms how people from outside cultures interact, both points have some merit, history showed time and time again that there are some negative aspects about a culture that caused great tragedies, local or even global, for example, the infamous “scramble for Africa” which caused several nations to suffer the scars of colonization to this very day
on the other hand, the culture of any nation is the culmination of their history and their beliefs and knowledge of the world, and understandably, people are proud of their history regardless of time passing, also, the culture of a country is an aspect that fascinated people ever since the start of civilization itself, we humans are , by nature, different from one another. And to find a culture that shares your values is something very important to build genuine and healthy relationships, whether romantic, familiar or casual.
Overall, some people believe that culture is not important in the modern day and that eventually we will have to discard it for a “better future”, however, while they do have some merit, the general idea is madness, culture is the soul of any nation and without it, what differentiates an American from an Egyptian, and so, to ensure the soul of our society remains, we must preserve our cultural heritage no matter what, for without a past, there is no future.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, however, if, so, while, for example, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 13.1623246493 122% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 16.0 10.4138276553 154% => OK
Relative clauses : 11.0 7.30460921844 151% => OK
Pronoun: 29.0 24.0651302605 121% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 38.0 41.998997996 90% => OK
Nominalization: 12.0 8.3376753507 144% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1668.0 1615.20841683 103% => OK
No of words: 328.0 315.596192385 104% => OK
Chars per words: 5.08536585366 5.12529762239 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.25567506705 4.20363070211 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.73813118154 2.80592935109 98% => OK
Unique words: 182.0 176.041082164 103% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.55487804878 0.561755894193 99% => OK
syllable_count: 531.9 506.74238477 105% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 6.0 2.52805611222 237% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 5.0 0.809619238477 618% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 3.0 16.0721442886 19% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 109.0 20.2975951904 537% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 515.466347646 49.4020404114 1043% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 556.0 106.682146367 521% => Less chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 109.333333333 20.7667163134 526% => Less words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 22.3333333333 7.06120827912 316% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 2.0 8.67935871743 23% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.248987014852 0.244688304435 102% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.152143877512 0.084324248473 180% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0605321441565 0.0667982634062 91% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.146674520172 0.151304729494 97% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0381812103317 0.056905535591 67% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 57.2 13.0946893788 437% => Automated_readability_index is high.
flesch_reading_ease: -39.16 50.2224549098 -78% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 14.6 7.44779559118 196% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 45.8 11.3001002004 405% => Flesch kincaid grade is high.
coleman_liau_index: 13.43 12.4159519038 108% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 12.99 8.58950901804 151% => OK
difficult_words: 82.0 78.4519038076 105% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 56.0 9.78957915832 572% => Linsear_write_formula is high.
gunning_fog: 45.6 10.1190380762 451% => Gunning_fog is high.
text_standard: 46.0 10.7795591182 427% => The average readability is very high. Good job!
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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