Some businesses prohibit smoking in any of their offices Some governments have banned smoking in all public places Do you agree or disagree that this is the right course of action Give reasons for your opinion

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Some businesses prohibit smoking in any of their offices. Some governments have banned smoking in all public places. Do you agree or disagree that this is the right course of action? Give reasons for your opinion.

Today, Most of the organisation as well as government is imposing restrictions on the use of smoking in workplace and public amenities. I obviously agree that this is the important idea to be implemented.

Firstly, smoking cigarettes or tobacco brings different diseases like asthma, blood pressure, cancer. This may have a detrimental effect on employee’s health and performance. Therefore, banning smoking in an organisation could create healthy free workplace. This could be an important step for both employees and company because on the one hand, employee could improve their health and ...

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Most of the organisation as well as government is imposing restrictions
Most of the organizations and governments are imposing restrictions

Finally, everyone including smokers have an idea
Finally, everyone including smokers has an idea

Sentence: Therefore, banning smoking in an organisation could create healthy free workplace.
Error: organisation Suggestion: organization

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However, the implementation of this idea throughout the whole world will definitely produce the healthy workforce.

why you used 'However' here?

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