Some children spend hours every day on their smartphones.
Why is the case? Do you think this is a positive or negative development?
Today, kids spend long hours playing and working with their mobile phones. I suppose this situation is mainly caused by apartment life, and it has deteriorating effects on their physical and mental health.
Living in multi-story buildings unpleasantly influences the inhabitants’ lifestyles; children are no exception. The primary problem caused for the younger ones is not having access to efficient areas for physical activities. This way, they tend to stay home and entertain themselves with their smartphones. This can stem from the fact that, nowadays, appropriate outdoor areas for children to play have been excluded from the apartments. To illustrate, in the past, families were used to living in houses with yards and gardens, and obviously, children had enough space to play outdoor games. Consequently, they were less likely to spend long hours at home. In contrast, due to the modern architecture of buildings, children are now compelled to stay inside, and there is nothing more appealing than smartphones to them to pass the time.
Considering this occasion, kids are now exposed to severe mental and physical issues. Firstly, they are more likely to gain weight since their metabolism can get distracted due to low activity levels. In other words, there is a high risk of obesity for juveniles who spend many hours sitting and just looking at their smartphones. Secondly, they may be exposed to sight issues. This is because of the diminishing lights and signals that point at the eyes and harm the sense of sight. Finally, young girls and boys with fewer opportunities to go out and play in the fresh air and also socialize with their peers are undoubtedly at risk of depression and anxiety. In a word, they feel lonely, and they cannot foster sufficient social skills. So, it is probable for them to experience levels of depression and undergo a distinguished amount of stress both as a child and an adult.
In conclusion, it is true that apartments have played a serious role in the time children spend on their mobile phones. It is also accurate that this development happened to be extremely negative since it leads to physical and mental issues for kids.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, consequently, finally, first, firstly, if, look, may, second, secondly, so, as for, i suppose, in conclusion, in contrast, in other words, it is true
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 18.0 13.1623246493 137% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 19.0 10.4138276553 182% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 32.0 24.0651302605 133% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 55.0 41.998997996 131% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1823.0 1615.20841683 113% => OK
No of words: 360.0 315.596192385 114% => OK
Chars per words: 5.06388888889 5.12529762239 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.35587717469 4.20363070211 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.76906271748 2.80592935109 99% => OK
Unique words: 205.0 176.041082164 116% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.569444444444 0.561755894193 101% => OK
syllable_count: 549.0 506.74238477 108% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 12.0 5.43587174349 221% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 4.0 0.809619238477 494% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 19.0 16.0721442886 118% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 35.1273898547 49.4020404114 71% => OK
Chars per sentence: 95.9473684211 106.682146367 90% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.9473684211 20.7667163134 91% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.15789473684 7.06120827912 116% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 9.0 3.9879759519 226% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.176033650428 0.244688304435 72% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0527534402217 0.084324248473 63% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0392758890263 0.0667982634062 59% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.123752843507 0.151304729494 82% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0312455991131 0.056905535591 55% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.9 13.0946893788 91% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 61.67 50.2224549098 123% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 11.3001002004 81% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.07 12.4159519038 97% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.61 8.58950901804 100% => OK
difficult_words: 93.0 78.4519038076 119% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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