It is important for people to take risks, both in their professional lives and their personal lives.
Do you think the advantages of taking risks outweigh the disadvantages
Being able to take risks is a crucial factor that influences people’s careers and personal lives. In my opinion, the upsides of taking risks are more noticeable than the downsides since accepting risks provides an individual with a wide variety of opportunities. Moreover, it enables them to have a regretless life.
Undoubtedly, to quit the private safe zone is to be exposed to various occasions that can make a massive change in life. This way, one lets them meet new people who might offer them tackling positions. In professional life, for instance, when a typical employee is ready to accept a challenge, he/she is open to new positions and promotions that can enormously impact his/her life. Otherwise, one might stay a simple employee throughout the whole life.
Besides, when people welcome risks, they are less likely to feel any regret in their lives. In other words, by taking every opportunity, an individual does not worry about missing one. In contrast, being preservative prevents people from concurring with new ideas and objectives. So, one in their 60s or 70s might feel sorry about what he/she has let go in the past. To give an example, many people regret losing precious relationships only because they were not able to endanger their safe zone to remain in that relationship.
In conclusion, although it is challenging to take risks and may cause severe anxiety, having no fear of experiencing this tackling occasion brings about significant progress in professional life and also helps people avoid a regretful life.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 43, Rule ID: ALLOW_TO[1]
Message: Did you mean 'taking'? Or maybe you should add a pronoun? In active voice, 'challenge' + 'to' takes an object, usually a pronoun.
Suggestion: taking
... conclusion, although it is challenging to take risks and may cause severe anxiety, hav...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, if, may, moreover, so, for instance, in conclusion, in contrast, in my opinion, in other words
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 10.4138276553 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 23.0 24.0651302605 96% => OK
Preposition: 36.0 41.998997996 86% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 8.3376753507 12% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1295.0 1615.20841683 80% => OK
No of words: 253.0 315.596192385 80% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.1185770751 5.12529762239 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.98822939669 4.20363070211 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.8130743289 2.80592935109 100% => OK
Unique words: 161.0 176.041082164 91% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.636363636364 0.561755894193 113% => OK
syllable_count: 407.7 506.74238477 80% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 8.0 4.76152304609 168% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 51.1071504626 49.4020404114 103% => OK
Chars per sentence: 99.6153846154 106.682146367 93% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.4615384615 20.7667163134 94% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.38461538462 7.06120827912 119% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.192862595531 0.244688304435 79% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0639778038792 0.084324248473 76% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0602484633925 0.0667982634062 90% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.12095801565 0.151304729494 80% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0623943851741 0.056905535591 110% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.4 13.0946893788 95% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 52.19 50.2224549098 104% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 11.3001002004 95% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.42 12.4159519038 100% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.64 8.58950901804 101% => OK
difficult_words: 65.0 78.4519038076 83% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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