It is important for people to take risks, both in their professional lives and their personal lives.
Do you think the advantages of taking risks outweigh the disadvantages?
Nowadays our rapid changing world is full of surprises and risks. Many people say that both part of life, in work and personal life, it is vital to try chances taking risks. Although, one could lose their fortune or whatever they have while risking, the outcome may be rewarding. However, it is not about risking spontaneously. I am convinced, the benefits of taking risks are more than drawbacks, but majority of time it must be calculated.
For example, my uncle was frauded when he trusted one of his friends who is in the field my uncle was unfamiliar with. In business, it is impossible without mutual trust to succeed. Entrepreneurs repeat several times to try different things to find the purpose in life. But, if one invest in the sphere which is unknown, there is more chances to lose, because it is hard to compete without certain expertise.
On the other side, when we look to personal life it is more transparent that taking risks is more advantageous than delaying actions due to lack of confidence. Some people tend to overthink, which causes to confusion or losing chances. For example, nobody could believe that on of my friend had had a roman with the most attractive girl in our university. About how he conquered her heart, he says, “Do it now”. If one is attracted to someone he should take action, make plan and do it immediately. One should stop to overthink to achieve a particular goal in life.
To sum up, taking calculated risks is more advantageous when it is calculated in both professional and personal life. If you are expert in a field, you have more chances to succeed in business when take risks. In personal life, we must be confident and stop overthink about the negative consequences and take actions.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 329, Rule ID: EN_GB_SIMPLE_REPLACE
Message: I is a common American expression, in British English it is more common to use: I
Suggestion: I
... it is not about risking spontaneously. I am convinced, the benefits of taking ri...
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Line 2, column 321, Rule ID: THERE_S_MANY[4]
Message: Did you mean 'there are more chances'?
Suggestion: there are more chances
... invest in the sphere which is unknown, there is more chances to lose, because it is hard to compete ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, however, if, look, may, so, while, for example, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 20.0 13.1623246493 152% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 7.30460921844 137% => OK
Pronoun: 30.0 24.0651302605 125% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 43.0 41.998997996 102% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 8.3376753507 12% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1444.0 1615.20841683 89% => OK
No of words: 303.0 315.596192385 96% => OK
Chars per words: 4.76567656766 5.12529762239 93% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.17215713816 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.70337928135 2.80592935109 96% => OK
Unique words: 171.0 176.041082164 97% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.564356435644 0.561755894193 100% => OK
syllable_count: 457.2 506.74238477 90% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 5.43587174349 147% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 2.10420841683 238% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 16.0721442886 112% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 20.2975951904 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 29.0882543857 49.4020404114 59% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 80.2222222222 106.682146367 75% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.8333333333 20.7667163134 81% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.44444444444 7.06120827912 49% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 8.67935871743 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.9879759519 150% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.23081120957 0.244688304435 94% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0672763148618 0.084324248473 80% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0672182195717 0.0667982634062 101% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.145124624045 0.151304729494 96% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0853632439562 0.056905535591 150% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.5 13.0946893788 73% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 63.7 50.2224549098 127% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.4 11.3001002004 74% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.09 12.4159519038 81% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.77 8.58950901804 90% => OK
difficult_words: 64.0 78.4519038076 82% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.1190380762 83% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.7795591182 74% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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