Some cities have few controls over the design and construction of housing and office buildings. People think that they should be free to choose the design they like. Do you think the advantages outweigh the disadvantages?
In some cities, the residents are comfortable in the design of their homes or office buildings in their own way due to government construction regulations in those places are limited. Although owners can gain some certain benefits, I believe that adverse impacts exceed positive effects that this trend can bring.
On the one hand, oversights loosened in building design will bear some benefits. First of all, it creates a condition for creativity. This allows designers and house owners to be more open to new ideas and to freely experiment with new materials and designs, which may finally lead to the arrival of more innovative and unique buildings. That will generate vivid images for the area and energetic atmosphere. Secondly, the freedom to choose the shape and structure of houses or buildings give owners an opportunity to show their personal preferences, while some may be passionate about a traditional design, others might enjoy a more modern style. In addition, office buildings are erected with creation can help employees enhancing work performance. For example, big companies such as Google, Facebook did not hesitate to work hard to arrange the best working space for staffs, not even regretting money to get a " million-dollar view" office.
On the other hand, I think that the disadvantages of this trend are more significant. Firstly, houses and office buildings which are built without any strict or unique building codes may be vulnerable to serious damage, especially natural disasters. For instance, accommodations in parts of central Vietnam, where there are few regulations from the government on their construction. Due to this lack of government control, whenever a fierce storm passes the region, thousands of houses lose their roofs, and even worse, are sometimes completely collapse, that serious menace to life and property. Furthermore, if authorities do not control of building design, the uniformity of a city can be distorted. This may damage the look of a region and it loses the beauty inherent in that place. Take Hoi An as an example, where is well-known attract millions of tourist each year with its traditional beauty. Therefore, when someone building a house followed by a modern style, it will ruin the traditional value of the city. As a result, the number of visitors coming there will be decreasing.
In conclusion, although the freedom of building design can have many positive effects, In my perspective, these advantages are overshadowed by the drawbacks.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 913, Rule ID: EN_A_VS_AN
Message: Use 'an' instead of 'a' if the following word starts with a vowel sound, e.g. 'an article', 'an hour'
Suggestion: an
...taffs, not even regretting money to get a ' million-dollar view' office...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
finally, first, firstly, furthermore, if, look, may, second, secondly, so, therefore, well, while, for example, for instance, i think, in addition, in conclusion, such as, as a result, first of all, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 13.1623246493 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 14.0 7.85571142285 178% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 10.4138276553 125% => OK
Relative clauses : 11.0 7.30460921844 151% => OK
Pronoun: 25.0 24.0651302605 104% => OK
Preposition: 49.0 41.998997996 117% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 8.3376753507 132% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2124.0 1615.20841683 132% => OK
No of words: 403.0 315.596192385 128% => OK
Chars per words: 5.27047146402 5.12529762239 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.48049772903 4.20363070211 107% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.90957715476 2.80592935109 104% => OK
Unique words: 233.0 176.041082164 132% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.578163771712 0.561755894193 103% => OK
syllable_count: 667.8 506.74238477 132% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 5.43587174349 166% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 7.0 2.10420841683 333% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 19.0 16.0721442886 118% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 54.2268243257 49.4020404114 110% => OK
Chars per sentence: 111.789473684 106.682146367 105% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.2105263158 20.7667163134 102% => OK
Discourse Markers: 11.3684210526 7.06120827912 161% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 13.0 8.67935871743 150% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.229441729611 0.244688304435 94% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0657315345826 0.084324248473 78% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0625096886359 0.0667982634062 94% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.133826172051 0.151304729494 88% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0247694758786 0.056905535591 44% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.0 13.0946893788 107% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 41.7 50.2224549098 83% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.7 11.3001002004 112% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.29 12.4159519038 107% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.38 8.58950901804 109% => OK
difficult_words: 120.0 78.4519038076 153% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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