In some cities, there are few controls over the design and construction of new homes and office buildings, so people can build in whatever style they like. Do you think the advantages outweigh the disadvantages?
There is no doubt house design has a considerable bearing on the urban landscape. However, people remain divided over whether or not to give home owners complete autonomy to design their own living space. In certain urban areas today, the regulation on the design and construction of homes is quite loose while this trend may offer some advantages, I believe they are outweighed by the more significant disadvantages.
On the one hand, entitling people to freedom in house design is advantageous to a certain extent. As home is a very personal space, being able to design it to our liking can be immensely enjoyable. If home owners are deprived of this freedom, they would feel uncomfortable and frustrated with their own property, which may adversely affect other aspects of their life. On the city level, having variation in house design could help the neighborhood and even the city as a whole look more vibrant. Paris perfectly exemplifies this principle This city is hailed as one of the most unique in the world as far as architectural style is concerned, which can be attributed to the fact that the houses here do not conform to a fixed aesthetic.
On the other hand, I am convinced that the aforementioned benefits are at the expense of greater drawbacks. First, there is the question of safety. The lack of control on how houses should be constructed could put the lives of the inhabitants in jeopardy. Second, aesthetically speaking, if home owners are allowed to design their house however they want, they may err on the side of being too adventurous and the building would look out of place with other structures in the same area. Most of us are not well-versed in architecture and home design, and houses that are in bad taste could seriously spoil the beauty of the city.
In conclusion, while letting people freely design their houses could be beneficial to some extent, I believe it would be better if there is a standard that everyone can adhere to.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 119, Rule ID: WHETHER[7]
Message: Perhaps you can shorten this phrase to just 'whether'. It is correct though if you mean 'regardless of whether'.
Suggestion: whether
...pe. However, people remain divided over whether or not to give home owners complete autonomy t...
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Line 3, column 575, Rule ID: VERY_UNIQUE[1]
Message: Use simply 'unique'.
Suggestion: unique
...ciple This city is hailed as one of the most unique in the world as far as architectural st...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, however, if, look, may, second, so, well, while, as to, in conclusion, no doubt, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 21.0 13.1623246493 160% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 14.0 7.85571142285 178% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 24.0 24.0651302605 100% => OK
Preposition: 44.0 41.998997996 105% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1639.0 1615.20841683 101% => OK
No of words: 338.0 315.596192385 107% => OK
Chars per words: 4.84911242604 5.12529762239 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.28774723029 4.20363070211 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.76669616724 2.80592935109 99% => OK
Unique words: 181.0 176.041082164 103% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.53550295858 0.561755894193 95% => OK
syllable_count: 524.7 506.74238477 104% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 24.0 20.2975951904 118% => OK
Sentence length SD: 56.9380705464 49.4020404114 115% => OK
Chars per sentence: 117.071428571 106.682146367 110% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.1428571429 20.7667163134 116% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.85714285714 7.06120827912 111% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.203712408713 0.244688304435 83% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0681871718815 0.084324248473 81% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0432949405302 0.0667982634062 65% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.127106693616 0.151304729494 84% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0321838558322 0.056905535591 57% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.5 13.0946893788 103% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 47.12 50.2224549098 94% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.7 11.3001002004 112% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.15 12.4159519038 90% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.56 8.58950901804 100% => OK
difficult_words: 80.0 78.4519038076 102% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.78957915832 117% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.1190380762 115% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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