Some claim that men are naturally more competitive than women.
To what extent do you agree or disagree?
It is stereotypically considered that the superiority in competency weighs more on men rather than women and to a certain extent, this is ostensibly true. However, I partially disagree with this statement for gender equality and thus the women’s ability to compete in this day-to-day society.
For one thing, the male possess greater competitive attitudes toward the others in certain contexts. In such situations require both mental and physical strength, they will gain more edge over the opposite sex, owing to the natural instinct and inborn physique development throughout years of training and suffering. Admittedly, they acknowledge the capability of accomplishing harder tasks and have a strong desire of flexing the advantages in order to get attention and admiration from females. In turn, this will trigger the competing spirit and thus enable them to exert their potential at the maximum level. For instance, the breadwinner of the family shoulders the responsibility of providing a sense of security for his wife and children, in terms of financial stability and being strong to protect his family from the dangers. Hence, it is reasonable to try his best in order to eliminate the anxiety of his relatives, precisely, his partner.
For another, due to the rapid evolving society, prejudices about gender bias are overshadowed by modern women's potential. In the context of the workplace, many female clerks pose abstractions in giving opinions for company strategies, given the permission to have their own speeches instead of blindly adhering to men’s decisions. Gender equality is such a great tool to kindle one’s enthusiasm and by utilizing the advantage of this, many manager positions are now filled with women for their excellent thinking and conscientiousness. Furthermore, given a minority of the leaders or administrations of a country are women, this still shows their role has become more socially significant and personally rewarding. By way of illustration, the role model would be Hillary Clinton, a German president and an evidence of the existing attempts and hard work of women in today’s world.
To conclude, I contend that women and men are equal in this area. To measure the level of competency amount to consider both inborn factors and individual progress.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
furthermore, hence, however, if, so, still, thus, for instance, for one thing
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 7.85571142285 38% => OK
Conjunction : 18.0 10.4138276553 173% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 7.30460921844 27% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 25.0 24.0651302605 104% => OK
Preposition: 59.0 41.998997996 140% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1949.0 1615.20841683 121% => OK
No of words: 363.0 315.596192385 115% => OK
Chars per words: 5.36914600551 5.12529762239 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.3649236973 4.20363070211 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.01709115859 2.80592935109 108% => OK
Unique words: 222.0 176.041082164 126% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.611570247934 0.561755894193 109% => OK
syllable_count: 615.6 506.74238477 121% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 5.43587174349 184% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 8.0 4.76152304609 168% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 24.0 20.2975951904 118% => OK
Sentence length SD: 47.3992967599 49.4020404114 96% => OK
Chars per sentence: 129.933333333 106.682146367 122% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.2 20.7667163134 117% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.13333333333 7.06120827912 73% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 8.67935871743 138% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.134540792237 0.244688304435 55% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0454194887227 0.084324248473 54% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0542292320599 0.0667982634062 81% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0883453640806 0.151304729494 58% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0494755798312 0.056905535591 87% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.0 13.0946893788 122% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 38.66 50.2224549098 77% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.8 11.3001002004 122% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.16 12.4159519038 114% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.31 8.58950901804 120% => OK
difficult_words: 126.0 78.4519038076 161% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.5 9.78957915832 128% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.1190380762 115% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.