Some companies sponsor sport as a way to advertise themselves. Some people think it is good for the world of sports, while others think there are disadvantages. Discuss both views and give your opinion.
It is generally argued that advertising the companies’ image through sponsoring sport is good for the sports area while some people hold the view that this practice has some drawbacks. This essay aims to analyze these perspectives before any conclusion can be reached.
On the one hand, there is a wide range of reasons why many are the opinion that this trend is to benefit the sports field. One of which is that the sports field can have a large amount of money from sponsorships. That means sports events could have a large budget to spend on preparing good skills for each member of a team such as exercising with well-qualified and gifted coaches. According to comprehensive research conducted by a Vietnamese organization that almost 48% of players in football teams admitted that thanks to sponsorship from some companies, they can improve their strategies and skills in competitions and are guided by many well-known coaches such as Parkland in Korea or Jakita in Thailand to name but a few. Moreover, people can access modern technology helping them enhance their experiences that they might not have before. Moreover, with strong finance, matches could be held in a large space with many seats for a large number of audiences. This practice plays a major role in advertising sport for people all around the world.
On the other hand, it is easy to understand why other people are of the opinion that this trend could have disadvantages. First, some companies producing a lot of low-quality products cause negative impacts on the sports field’s image. In other words, the sport has a reputation in people from all walks of life and attracts a number of audiences participating in almost events related to sport. Therefore, this is the place that many people could use this kind of product and have a bad experience not only about the goods but also a match and they might do not want to enjoy this kind of event anymore.
In conclusion, although having a large budget to access with gifted coach as well as modern technology are some of the main reasons why people think this practice gaining advantages and low-quality products causing a bad impact on the sport’s field are also the reason of its disadvantages, I strongly believe that its merits could outweigh the demerits.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 103, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[1]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'sports'' or 'sport's'?
Suggestion: sports'; sport's
...hrough sponsoring sport is good for the sports area while some people hold the view th...
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Line 3, column 849, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Two successive sentences begin with the same adverb. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
...iences that they might not have before. Moreover, with strong finance, matches could be ...
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Line 3, column 939, Rule ID: LARGE_NUMBER_OF[1]
Message: Specify a number, remove phrase, or simply use 'many' or 'numerous'
Suggestion: many; numerous
...ld in a large space with many seats for a large number of audiences. This practice plays a major ...
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Line 5, column 108, Rule ID: SOME_OF_THE[1]
Message: Simply use 'some'.
Suggestion: some
... coach as well as modern technology are some of the main reasons why people think this prac...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, if, moreover, so, therefore, well, while, in conclusion, kind of, such as, as well as, in other words, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 13.1623246493 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 7.85571142285 140% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 12.0 7.30460921844 164% => OK
Pronoun: 32.0 24.0651302605 133% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 53.0 41.998997996 126% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1909.0 1615.20841683 118% => OK
No of words: 388.0 315.596192385 123% => OK
Chars per words: 4.92010309278 5.12529762239 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.43821085614 4.20363070211 106% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.72118450222 2.80592935109 97% => OK
Unique words: 199.0 176.041082164 113% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.512886597938 0.561755894193 91% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 581.4 506.74238477 115% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 5.43587174349 147% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 27.0 20.2975951904 133% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 84.9518771339 49.4020404114 172% => OK
Chars per sentence: 136.357142857 106.682146367 128% => OK
Words per sentence: 27.7142857143 20.7667163134 133% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.85714285714 7.06120827912 140% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 8.67935871743 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.273030718381 0.244688304435 112% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.103945079306 0.084324248473 123% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.102144943717 0.0667982634062 153% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.186728685609 0.151304729494 123% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0747758790693 0.056905535591 131% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.6 13.0946893788 119% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 52.53 50.2224549098 105% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.6 11.3001002004 112% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.55 12.4159519038 93% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.39 8.58950901804 98% => OK
difficult_words: 84.0 78.4519038076 107% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 9.78957915832 107% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.8 10.1190380762 126% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.