Some companies sponsor sport as a way to advertise themselves. Some people think it is good for the world of sports, while others think there are disadvantages. Discuss both views and give your opinion.
The concept of sponsoring sport as a way to advertize has become quite popular lately among companies. Many people state that it is for the good of the world of sports while others against and give out drawbacks. While there are still contradictions regarding the topic, which will be further covered in this essay, I would argue that it is better if companies were to continue sponsoring sports as to marketing themselves.
One of the biggest reasons why people think that there are disadvantages might be simply due to the fact that money involves. Simply put, money is the key factor that affects and takes away core values of sports. When Nike sponsored Michael Jordan, for instance, Nike’s aim was to advertize themselves by adressing this legendary player to wear their most sophisticated shoes ever. As a result, these shoes became catwalk fashion shoes rather than normal performance shoes to play in. Therefore, money could be a key element contributing to the disadvantages.
On the other hand, some individuals believe that it is good for the world of sports, and I too agree, simply because it brings sports closer to people through the products of a specific company. Many of us initially do not play sports but rather than colleting and showcasing the essentials, which will eventually raise the passion in a certain kind of sport. Take Andrew for example, who is a youtuber and a shoe collector. He is not a basketball player, but the passion in showcasing beautiful sneakers drives him into a professional street baller. This results in a vast amount of people become more involve in sports. Therefore, sponsoring should take place between sports and companies.
In conclusion, the pros outweighs the cons when sports under taken sponsorships from companies, which will bring more and more people to take part in the sport they enjoy.
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- Professional sports are a very large industry in the world today The most elite players can get contracts worth many millions of dollars Some say there is too much money in sports and that it defeats the purpose of the actual game Do you agree or disagree 61
- Some companies sponsor sport as a way to advertise themselves Some people think it is good for the world of sports while others think there are disadvantages Discuss both views and give your opinion 89
Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, if, regarding, so, still, therefore, while, as to, for example, for instance, in conclusion, kind of, as a result, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 12.0 7.30460921844 164% => OK
Pronoun: 23.0 24.0651302605 96% => OK
Preposition: 39.0 41.998997996 93% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 8.3376753507 36% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1553.0 1615.20841683 96% => OK
No of words: 309.0 315.596192385 98% => OK
Chars per words: 5.02588996764 5.12529762239 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.1926597562 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.73414713992 2.80592935109 97% => OK
Unique words: 184.0 176.041082164 105% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.595469255663 0.561755894193 106% => OK
syllable_count: 465.3 506.74238477 92% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 46.8040833926 49.4020404114 95% => OK
Chars per sentence: 103.533333333 106.682146367 97% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.6 20.7667163134 99% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.13333333333 7.06120827912 129% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.294344885452 0.244688304435 120% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0865327716027 0.084324248473 103% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0843098303156 0.0667982634062 126% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.16551839335 0.151304729494 109% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0852153164214 0.056905535591 150% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.6 13.0946893788 96% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 59.64 50.2224549098 119% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 11.3001002004 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.89 12.4159519038 96% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.41 8.58950901804 98% => OK
difficult_words: 74.0 78.4519038076 94% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 9.78957915832 107% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.