Some countries are using car as the mode of transport. Other countries are using bicycle.
Why do you think this trend is happening?
What development do you think is better?
It is undoubtedly true that people nowadays have various options on what kind of transport vehicle to use for travelling. While in some countries, bicycles are commonly used, I believe that cars are better option as will be discussed.
On the one hand, other people who think that bicycle is a more useful might argue that it is environmental-friendly as it has no emission of carbon dioxide that pollute the air. In addition to lessen cost, cycling is advisable in short distance travel. To illustrate, the survey in the University of Hongkong claimed that most respondents who travel less than one kilometer had a favourable responds to a bicycle. This clearly indicates that the use of a bicycle is justified based on their living conditions.
On the other hand, I believe that a motor vehicle is the better means of transport. This is because it can provide mobility in farther distance. Most industrialized countries have advanced infrastructure such as wider highways and elevated motorways. The road users can utilize this facilities to move at any point in the city center. For instance, in the research at the University of Sydney found that people have high regards in the usage of cars than in bicycle. In contrast, if the resident will ride a bicycle instead of cars, there will be a delayed in the work performance due to the late arrival in their respective offices.
In conclusion, although using bicycle is widely used in some countries because of the health benefits in the environment and short distance travel, I believe that car usage is a better development.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Probably a noun is missing in this part of the sentence.
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Message: Did you mean 'these'?
Suggestion: these
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Discourse Markers used:
['if', 'so', 'while', 'for instance', 'in addition', 'in conclusion', 'in contrast', 'in short', 'kind of', 'such as', 'on the other hand']
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance in Part of Speech:
Nouns: 0.272413793103 0.247107183377 110% => OK
Verbs: 0.151724137931 0.155533422707 98% => OK
Adjectives: 0.0793103448276 0.0946595960268 84% => OK
Adverbs: 0.0241379310345 0.0501214627716 48% => Some adverbs wanted.
Pronouns: 0.0310344827586 0.0437548338989 71% => OK
Prepositions: 0.175862068966 0.122226691241 144% => OK
Participles: 0.0275862068966 0.0403226058552 68% => OK
Conjunctions: 2.96954646872 2.80594681477 106% => OK
Infinitives: 0.0206896551724 0.0326793684256 63% => OK
Particles: 0.0 0.00163938923432 0% => OK
Determiners: 0.110344827586 0.0861772015684 128% => OK
Modal_auxiliary: 0.0206896551724 0.021408717616 97% => OK
WH_determiners: 0.0137931034483 0.011925033212 116% => OK
Vocabulary words and sentences:
No of characters: 1588.0 1933.35771543 82% => OK
No of words: 266.0 316.048096192 84% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.96992481203 6.12580529183 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.03850299372 4.20517956788 96% => OK
words length more than 5 chars: 0.357142857143 0.374742101984 95% => OK
words length more than 6 chars: 0.296992481203 0.28420135186 105% => OK
words length more than 7 chars: 0.191729323308 0.203846283523 94% => OK
words length more than 8 chars: 0.116541353383 0.137316102897 85% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.96954646872 2.80594681477 106% => OK
Unique words: 150.0 176.037074148 85% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.563909774436 0.56093040696 101% => OK
Word variations: 57.1668944294 60.7387585426 94% => OK
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0891783567 81% => OK
Sentence length: 20.4615384615 20.7743622355 98% => OK
Sentence length SD: 41.7807747187 49.517814964 84% => OK
Chars per sentence: 122.153846154 127.492653851 96% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.4615384615 20.7743622355 98% => OK
Discourse Markers: 0.846153846154 0.814263465372 104% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38877755511 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 3.99599198397 50% => OK
Readability: 50.1607865818 49.1944974215 102% => OK
Elegance: 2.3 1.69124875643 136% => OK
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.26095066535 0.332605444948 78% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence: 0.104034564189 0.102741220458 101% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence SD: 0.08844409591 0.0668466124924 132% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence: 0.555873453619 0.534860350844 104% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence SD: 0.204976120755 0.148594505496 138% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.11261180919 0.134430193775 84% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0606855747033 0.0742795772207 82% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence: 0.383695227804 0.324371583561 118% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence SD: 0.113674105992 0.0638462369009 178% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.193012024806 0.228012699653 85% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0322354733851 0.058150111329 55% => The ideas may be duplicated in paragraphs.
Task Achievement:
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.68436873747 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.41683366733 146% => OK
Positive topic words: 7.0 5.90881763527 118% => OK
Negative topic words: 1.0 2.5751503006 39% => OK
Neutral topic words: 2.0 1.9629258517 102% => OK
Total topic words: 10.0 10.4468937876 96% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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Note: This is not the final score. The e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.