Nowadays, concurrent with expanding urban life and distributing facilities in people`s life, the average weight of people is increasing slightly and it causes to decreasing their levels health and fitness. Hence, there are some debates about best methods to diminish the effects of high weight between health experts in different societies.
Some medicine researchers are unanimous in several prominent reasons which lead to increasing people`s weight. As they mentioned the first significant reason for this phenomenon is decreasing physical activities and sports among people in contemporary century. Recent published reports in U.K. illustrated that people`s sport activities in the year 2000 was doubled in comparison with 2018. Furthermore, eating fast food and some fatty foods caused to increasing people`s weight and it influences on their health indicators during recent decades. In addition to these main reasons, some fat people inherited this issue from their parent and actually eating food at the same level with other people get them more obese undoubtedly.
On the other aspect, there are some fundamental solution ways to control people`s weight after recognizing the main cause of this issue. Obviously, to diminish detrimental effects of fatness people should decline amount of their eating in particular diet procedure. The second influenced method to control this problem is increasing these people`s alacrity in physical activities. Last investigations in sport department of Oxford University revealed that by 2 hours sport activities in daily program more than three forth of fat people who participated in this research could decrease at least 5 kg in one month. It was an appropriate news for fat people to increase their motivation and achieve this consequence.
In conclusion, by pursuing this pattern in people`s lifestyle, majority of experts anticipate that the number of fat people will increase sharply in next decades. I believe that we should devise some preventive plans to decrease impacts of this problem in individual and social life. In my point of view the best method in this event is informing people about results of this problem from their childhood.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 242, Rule ID: THE_SUPERLATIVE[4]
Message: A determiner is probably missing here: 'about the best'.
Suggestion: about the best
... fitness. Hence, there are some debates about best methods to diminish the effects of high...
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Line 3, column 632, Rule ID: A_UNCOUNTABLE[3]
Message: Uncountable nouns are usually not used with an indefinite article. Use simply 'appropriate news'.
Suggestion: appropriate news
...ease at least 5 kg in one month. It was an appropriate news for fat people to increase their motiva...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
actually, but, first, furthermore, hence, if, second, so, at least, in addition, in conclusion, in particular
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 13.1623246493 68% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 30.0 24.0651302605 125% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 58.0 41.998997996 138% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1897.0 1615.20841683 117% => OK
No of words: 339.0 315.596192385 107% => OK
Chars per words: 5.59587020649 5.12529762239 109% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.29091512845 4.20363070211 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.98025921495 2.80592935109 106% => OK
Unique words: 193.0 176.041082164 110% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.569321533923 0.561755894193 101% => OK
syllable_count: 569.7 506.74238477 112% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 35.7917433061 49.4020404114 72% => OK
Chars per sentence: 126.466666667 106.682146367 119% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.6 20.7667163134 109% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.26666666667 7.06120827912 103% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.4128256513 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.236551857682 0.244688304435 97% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0929277086211 0.084324248473 110% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0523200514191 0.0667982634062 78% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.164808229773 0.151304729494 109% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0410353191875 0.056905535591 72% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.2 13.0946893788 124% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 40.69 50.2224549098 81% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.1 11.3001002004 116% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 15.5 12.4159519038 125% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.25 8.58950901804 108% => OK
difficult_words: 97.0 78.4519038076 124% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 9.78957915832 123% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 16.0 10.7795591182 148% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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