In some countries boarding schools are getting more popular. Is it a positive or negative development? What are the reasons behind it?
Boarding schools are becoming more popular in several nations because many parents are overworked. On the other hand, it has a beneficial influence on producing graduates who have strong self-discipline.
If students attend boarding schools, they tend to be highly self-disciplined because there are some regulations of stringent rule, and there is close monitoring from teachers. Students should to finish their schoolwork on time, and they are restrained themselves from drinking and smoking. Such capacity of self-control they form in boarding school tremendously benefits their personal success all the way through their academic study and professional career. Students at Ananda boarding school are required to enter the class at 6 A.M and finish at 4 P.M, after the Class they should do task assessment. Seldom do graduates of these schools become unsuccessful at their jobs and life.
The main reason why boarding schools are getting more popular is that parents are busier. Behind the price of consumer goods and housing soaring are parent now have to work 3 times harder to support their families, so they leave almost no time to accompany their children. Parents do not have a choice, but one thing they can do is send their children to boarding school. As many as 70% of young parents in Indonesia who work 8 hours a day, even at home, or travel frequently send their children to boarding schools because they know how inconsistent they will be in parenting or providing for the needs of their kids.
In conclusion, the major reason that boarding schools are becoming more popular is that parents' schedules are becoming more hectic. However, this benefits for their children since they will have a highly disciplined disposition. If possible, parents In conjunction with school stakeholders should continue to provide supervision to children.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, however, if, so, in conclusion, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 13.1623246493 122% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 26.0 24.0651302605 108% => OK
Preposition: 37.0 41.998997996 88% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1568.0 1615.20841683 97% => OK
No of words: 296.0 315.596192385 94% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.2972972973 5.12529762239 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.14784890444 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.85665415705 2.80592935109 102% => OK
Unique words: 167.0 176.041082164 95% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.564189189189 0.561755894193 100% => OK
syllable_count: 459.0 506.74238477 91% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 4.0 0.809619238477 494% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 49.2394223165 49.4020404114 100% => OK
Chars per sentence: 120.615384615 106.682146367 113% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.7692307692 20.7667163134 110% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.15384615385 7.06120827912 59% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.4128256513 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.19341922736 0.244688304435 79% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0950043313436 0.084324248473 113% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.105628034456 0.0667982634062 158% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.135003242703 0.151304729494 89% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0287988718149 0.056905535591 51% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.9 13.0946893788 114% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 49.15 50.2224549098 98% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 11.3001002004 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.76 12.4159519038 111% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.41 8.58950901804 98% => OK
difficult_words: 69.0 78.4519038076 88% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 9.78957915832 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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