In some countries citizens must pay a lot of money in taxes, but education and healthcare are free. Do the advantages of this situation outweigh the disadvantages?
Most people have different opinions about paying higher taxes, especially those who have the job of high incomes, yet some people denote that it should not be paying for this. In my opinion, I agree that the government should provide healthcare and education for residents.
First of all, how the government provides healthcare and education if people are not paying proper taxes. It is a wise investment in improving physical and mental healthcare by providing all citizens. People will be more prosperous economies and well-being and more healthy and happy. In contrast, citizens have an unhappy life if they cannot afford education and healthcare. For these reasons, people have the responsibility to pay for their money in taxes.
Moreover, people who got a high education to maintain that can reduce crime rates and people who receive great capable of finding a satisfying salary job. Whereas, less-educated people who find difficult and hopeless or less motivated in their life, so they tend to commit a crime and drug abuse and become homeless. As a result, it is a beneficial investment for the government providing education free.
To sum up, it is an advantage rather than a disadvantage if people have to pay high taxes to supports the education cost and healthcare fee, and I visibly believe that the government should cover those costs for the well-being of residents.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, if, moreover, so, well, whereas, in contrast, as a result, first of all, in my opinion, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 13.1623246493 61% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 15.0 10.4138276553 144% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 19.0 24.0651302605 79% => OK
Preposition: 18.0 41.998997996 43% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 12.0 8.3376753507 144% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1164.0 1615.20841683 72% => OK
No of words: 227.0 315.596192385 72% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.12775330396 5.12529762239 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.88156143495 4.20363070211 92% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.8063229993 2.80592935109 100% => OK
Unique words: 128.0 176.041082164 73% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.563876651982 0.561755894193 100% => OK
syllable_count: 367.2 506.74238477 72% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 16.0721442886 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 48.8825544774 49.4020404114 99% => OK
Chars per sentence: 105.818181818 106.682146367 99% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.6363636364 20.7667163134 99% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.45454545455 7.06120827912 134% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.176284188765 0.244688304435 72% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0732215573578 0.084324248473 87% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0442151096512 0.0667982634062 66% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.115957021406 0.151304729494 77% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.034256148525 0.056905535591 60% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.1 13.0946893788 100% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 51.18 50.2224549098 102% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.3001002004 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.47 12.4159519038 100% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.25 8.58950901804 96% => OK
difficult_words: 52.0 78.4519038076 66% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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