You share a parking area with several neighbours and have recently started having problems. Write a letter to be copied to all neighbours that share the parking area:
explaining the problems
suggesting ways to help the situation
proposing a possible meeting
Dear Neighbours:
I am writing this letter to notice a number of problems I have recently concerning our public parking space. We are only ten families sharing this area, and I suggest we find a solution to the unsuitable behaviours of the sharing parking area.
As everyone knows, we have a limited parking area, some residents have more than one area in this park. Few people have used these parking spots to host parties and smoking cannabis frequently. In addition, these members didn’t clean those parking areas when they finished the party. It was really bothered other people who felt unhappy with these problems.
I suggest we should act together to avoid these problems in the future, and setting up clearer warning signs. Also, I would like to meet everyone to discuss these and other problems on Saturday. October 3rd at 10:30 am. I am happy to take charge of this meeting in my apartment which is Flat 21. Please call me and let me know if you would be attending this meeting: 236-112-3332.
Best regards,
Emma Williams
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 17, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
Dear Neighbours: I am writing this letter to notice a num...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, if, really, so, in addition
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 4.0 7.48453608247 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 4.92783505155 61% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 5.05154639175 99% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.03092783505 99% => OK
Pronoun: 28.0 32.9175257732 85% => OK
Preposition: 21.0 26.3917525773 80% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 3.85567010309 78% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 870.0 937.175257732 93% => OK
No of words: 178.0 206.0 86% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.88764044944 4.54256449028 108% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.65262427087 3.78020617076 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.46991748082 2.54303337028 97% => OK
Unique words: 124.0 127.690721649 97% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.696629213483 0.622605031667 112% => OK
syllable_count: 259.2 290.88556701 89% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.41237113402 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 9.13402061856 88% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.463917525773 431% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 12.6804123711 95% => OK
Sentence length: 14.0 16.3608247423 86% => OK
Sentence length SD: 32.2803474785 44.8134815571 72% => OK
Chars per sentence: 72.5 76.5299724578 95% => OK
Words per sentence: 14.8333333333 16.8248392259 88% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.75 4.34317383033 63% => OK
Paragraphs: 3.0 4.29896907216 70% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 1.0 2.54639175258 39% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 7.41237113402 94% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 1.49484536082 268% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.94845360825 25% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.311972919169 0.216113520407 144% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0938401389243 0.0766984524023 122% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0858004536827 0.0603063233224 142% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.214117746438 0.12726935374 168% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0975176499373 0.0580467560999 168% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.0 8.37731958763 107% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 65.73 70.7449484536 93% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.6 7.45979381443 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.49 8.71597938144 120% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.79 7.59969072165 103% => OK
difficult_words: 39.0 41.2886597938 94% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 8.62886597938 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 7.6 8.54432989691 89% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 8.15463917526 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.