Certain countries decide to limit time allowed for working for employees. This essay will suggest that possibility to create more work places in those countries is the biggest advantage of this and discuss why an obstacle on the way of self-developing professional skills is the primary disadvantage.
Bounded working time supposes that employers have to invite a couple or more expert for a sole vacancy. This allows to keep high average revenue per citizen in balance and, in addition, it wipes out the percentage of unemployment. Moreover, the law warrants enough amount of free time to recover an energy, to take up a hobby and leisure time during working week. For example, The Times recently reported that in Melbourne maximal time you can spend on job is 40 hours per week. Employees have a lot of time for wishful activities. I suppose this is the main reason why huge amount of people choose this city for migration, work and living.
Despite these advantages, many specialists may suffer of lack of experience. Top vacancies demand well-known general skills and, furthermore, extra abilities which is impossible to obsess from academic area knowledge. For instance, a recent survey by British Government found out that 64% of employees prefer to work without a limit of working time to improve own career ladder.
In conclusion, introducing a law to limit working hours for employees can be advantageous because it allows creating more vacancies, however, it also can make a problem for inexperienced specialists to level up their proficiency altogether.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 116, Rule ID: ALLOW_TO[1]
Message: Did you mean 'keeping'? Or maybe you should add a pronoun? In active voice, 'allow' + 'to' takes an object, usually a pronoun.
Suggestion: keeping
... expert for a sole vacancy. This allows to keep high average revenue per citizen in bal...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, furthermore, however, may, moreover, so, well, for example, for instance, i suppose, in addition, in conclusion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 13.1623246493 46% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 10.4138276553 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 17.0 24.0651302605 71% => OK
Preposition: 37.0 41.998997996 88% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1316.0 1615.20841683 81% => OK
No of words: 254.0 315.596192385 80% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.1811023622 5.12529762239 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.99216450694 4.20363070211 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.92445227433 2.80592935109 104% => OK
Unique words: 159.0 176.041082164 90% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.625984251969 0.561755894193 111% => OK
syllable_count: 416.7 506.74238477 82% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 54.8069845508 49.4020404114 111% => OK
Chars per sentence: 109.666666667 106.682146367 103% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.1666666667 20.7667163134 102% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.75 7.06120827912 138% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.282983753595 0.244688304435 116% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0959562178397 0.084324248473 114% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.075086233814 0.0667982634062 112% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.171664575904 0.151304729494 113% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.074502436532 0.056905535591 131% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.6 13.0946893788 104% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 50.16 50.2224549098 100% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 11.3001002004 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.76 12.4159519038 103% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.71 8.58950901804 113% => OK
difficult_words: 81.0 78.4519038076 103% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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