In some countries, the high rates of crimes are committed by teenagers. why this has happened? the effects of the happenings.
The crime in most of the countries increases day by day and some of these countries have high crime rates acted by the teenage group of people. The greed of having a luxury and achieving the highest peak in life by acquiring the shortcuts make an almost negative impact over young minds.
The youngsters of this generation have many dreams and desires at the early stage of their liveliness. They want it to fulfilled early as possible without going through struggles and paying of any hard work. The need for prosperous animation induces them to do illegal things and create a criminal stimulation. The ideas of attaining crime evolved in their brains by seeing the criminal stories and watching the videos over the internet and televisions.
In this instance, most of the teenagers only stole money to spend on buying drugs and chemicals because they get addicted to consuming it. The trauma of requiring drugs on a daily basis made them helpless, When they do not take it then might be they can not survive. And by this, They start doing crimes for purchasing the drugs. Another reason of the happening of a crime is depression, post traumas and unhealthy competition between the people. Being overprotective and possessive for something for a long time with insecurities and a parting the boundaries of limitations is also a big issue of occurring crimes.
The internal emotions and feelings sometimes difficult to express by the children, so they have a tendency in their mind that no one will listen to them. People ignore them and none of family or friends treat them well and make them feel loved and protected. From this, they get distracted and disconnected from the world and join their own demons which enables negative energy around their surroundings. Even mostly don't understand the difference between good and bad affairs. However, the impact of this occurrence is close to parenting, how parents educating and guiding their children and how the atmosphere of the living filled the gaps between the minds.
In conclusion, the important issue is the rate of growing crime is dependent upon the character of the person as well also on the upbringing of the family. Every family has to be aware of the activities of their children and providing a responsible amount of right direction for a positive life. In addition, also give them love and appreciation and not comparing from the others.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, however, if, so, then, well, as to, in addition, in conclusion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 13.1623246493 61% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 7.85571142285 38% => OK
Conjunction : 25.0 10.4138276553 240% => Less conjunction wanted
Relative clauses : 3.0 7.30460921844 41% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 31.0 24.0651302605 129% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 61.0 41.998997996 145% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 8.3376753507 120% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2227.0 1615.20841683 138% => OK
No of words: 414.0 315.596192385 131% => OK
Chars per words: 5.37922705314 5.12529762239 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.51076378781 4.20363070211 107% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.98598518581 2.80592935109 142% => OK
Unique words: 241.0 176.041082164 137% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.582125603865 0.561755894193 104% => OK
syllable_count: 669.6 506.74238477 132% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 9.0 2.52805611222 356% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 20.0 16.0721442886 124% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 51.1394906115 49.4020404114 104% => OK
Chars per sentence: 111.35 106.682146367 104% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.7 20.7667163134 100% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.4 7.06120827912 48% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 6.0 4.38176352705 137% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 8.0 5.01903807615 159% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 10.0 3.9879759519 251% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0984220917158 0.244688304435 40% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0302270099025 0.084324248473 36% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0409174145025 0.0667982634062 61% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0511246017583 0.151304729494 34% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0298031175022 0.056905535591 52% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.3 13.0946893788 109% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 51.18 50.2224549098 102% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.3001002004 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.92 12.4159519038 112% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.63 8.58950901804 100% => OK
difficult_words: 105.0 78.4519038076 134% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum five paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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