Nowadays, there is a high proportion of people consuming fast food around the globe. This has caused some severe health problems to these people. Everyone loves fast food because it is delicious. In addition, people can save the time to prepare food to their children especially the parents who are workaholic. They ignore the bad effects of the fast food such as obesity. Therefore, I agree that governments shall impose tax on fast food to some extent.
First of all, I think a higher tax shall be imposed on fast food because the health of the citizens is important to the development of the c...
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 293, Rule ID: WHO_NOUN[1]
Message: A noun should not follow "who". Try changing to a verb or maybe to 'who is a are'.
Suggestion: who is a are
...o their children especially the parents who are workaholic. They ignore the bad effects...
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Line 3, column 283, Rule ID: PERIOD_OF_TIME[1]
Message: Use simply 'period'.
Suggestion: period
... to face the problem of obesity after a period of time. Besides, high blood pressure and high ...
^^^^^^^^^^^^^^
Line 5, column 336, Rule ID: AFFORD_VB[1]
Message: This verb is used with the infinitive: 'to fast'
Suggestion: to fast
...her tax imposed, people will not choose fast food as the cost of consuming fast food...
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Discourse Markers used:
['besides', 'consequently', 'first', 'however', 'if', 'second', 'secondly', 'so', 'therefore', 'as to', 'for instance', 'i think', 'in addition', 'in conclusion', 'such as', 'as a result', 'first of all']
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance in Part of Speech:
Nouns: 0.266283524904 0.247107183377 108% => OK
Verbs: 0.159003831418 0.155533422707 102% => OK
Adjectives: 0.0689655172414 0.0946595960268 73% => OK
Adverbs: 0.044061302682 0.0501214627716 88% => OK
Pronouns: 0.0383141762452 0.0437548338989 88% => OK
Prepositions: 0.128352490421 0.122226691241 105% => OK
Participles: 0.0402298850575 0.0403226058552 100% => OK
Conjunctions: 2.76585078331 2.80594681477 99% => OK
Infinitives: 0.0344827586207 0.0326793684256 106% => OK
Particles: 0.0 0.00163938923432 0% => More particles wanted.
Determiners: 0.113026819923 0.0861772015684 131% => OK
Modal_auxiliary: 0.0383141762452 0.021408717616 179% => OK
WH_determiners: 0.0172413793103 0.011925033212 145% => OK
Vocabulary words and sentences:
No of characters: 2826.0 1933.35771543 146% => OK
No of words: 480.0 316.048096192 152% => Less content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.8875 6.12580529183 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.68069463864 4.20517956788 111% => OK
words length more than 5 chars: 0.360416666667 0.374742101984 96% => OK
words length more than 6 chars: 0.21875 0.28420135186 77% => OK
words length more than 7 chars: 0.1625 0.203846283523 80% => OK
words length more than 8 chars: 0.10625 0.137316102897 77% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.76585078331 2.80594681477 99% => OK
Unique words: 194.0 176.037074148 110% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.404166666667 0.56093040696 72% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
Word variations: 45.090054823 60.7387585426 74% => OK
How many sentences: 25.0 16.0891783567 155% => OK
Sentence length: 19.2 20.7743622355 92% => OK
Sentence length SD: 42.5522925352 49.517814964 86% => OK
Chars per sentence: 113.04 127.492653851 89% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.2 20.7743622355 92% => OK
Discourse Markers: 0.68 0.814263465372 84% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38877755511 114% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 3.99599198397 75% => OK
Readability: 41.075 49.1944974215 83% => OK
Elegance: 1.80158730159 1.69124875643 107% => OK
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.384360869183 0.332605444948 116% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence: 0.117901949177 0.102741220458 115% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence SD: 0.0797612669857 0.0668466124924 119% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence: 0.54436830096 0.534860350844 102% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence SD: 0.1563568862 0.148594505496 105% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.175467681028 0.134430193775 131% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0781221583364 0.0742795772207 105% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence: 0.506436716953 0.324371583561 156% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence SD: 0.0849256733279 0.0638462369009 133% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.31028805449 0.228012699653 136% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0498690001358 0.058150111329 86% => OK
Task Achievement:
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.68436873747 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 10.0 3.9879759519 251% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 3.41683366733 205% => Less neutral sentences wanted.
Positive topic words: 8.0 5.90881763527 135% => OK
Negative topic words: 9.0 2.5751503006 349% => OK
Neutral topic words: 5.0 1.9629258517 255% => OK
Total topic words: 22.0 10.4468937876 211% => OK
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay E-rater: 6.5 Out of 9